Devour Me

I Want to have SEX
with your Words

I Want your Poem
Deep in my Dirt like Roots
that Dig down Deep

You made them Burst in me
like Bombs Exploding
with XXX's and Ooo's

I Want your Metaphors
to Deflower me
Mind Body
and Soul

I Want a Kiss
with every word
that gives Birth
to the Mingling
of Minds

I want your Poem
to wrap itself
around
my
Body
like a
Flowering Vine
Strangling

I Want to Eat them
swallow them whole
like a Starving Soul

Swallow them
Letter by Letter
Savoring their meaning
like a Forgotten Language
Forgotten by the World
but we hold the Only Key
two Halves made Whole

I Want your Passion
to run Wild across my Flesh
like a Beast Free from its Cage

Crunch Bone
Suck the Marrow

Devour me

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Samantha (:]

Whoa, this is awesome. Sad thing is....I think I've been attracted to more poems than I have guys. Haha, great work!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol I think I can say the same

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

and thanks

Greatr poem. Very specific details. It was easy to get a picture out of it however you made it so everyone would get a different picture than each other. Great job.

[Clockwork]

This reminds me very much of the other poem of your that I liked so much. Your metaphor is quite effective and arousing in this poem as it was in the other one. You challenge your lover to engage every element of your being with his words. It is the kind of sex that feeds the hunger of the body, the mind, and the soul. Well done!

[Writer *78*]

This is one of my favorites. The overall passion and desire you express in this poem is 'devouring' in itself. Nice work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire in the poem. Good story and poetry is like good sex. You desire more with each read. I like the flow of thoughts and the great desire for passion in the poem. No weakness in the outstanding poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

[M.Babu]

You have adeptness in this genre!

"I want your Poem
to wrap itself around my Body
like a Flowering Vine Strangling
I Want to Eat them
swallow them whole
like a Starving Soul"

Talent at its best!

[GTVile]

You're really good at these, lol. I'm impressed at how well and how differently you can say things about one subject matter. This is masterful.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very steamy! or passionate as you prefer.
I like the passion within these lines and the using of poetry and all the it embodies as the lover. Truly unique and enjoyable.

Chloe

[Art Sun]

nice work...there is emotion within your sensul thoughts...