wrote this back in 2007 it was posted back when a lot of poems were lost on this site :(
Touch me in verses In lines, breaks and spaces In every comma dots and dashes, Think of me in my barest Then feel me deeply with your mind and senses... Love me in verses In haiku's, quatrains or sonnets With a pen and a sheet of paper Open up your mind, heart and soul Something you've never really done before... Or why don't you just kiss me in verses? Talk dirty to me in free verses or old fashion prose With your mind, I want you to explore what's in between my legs in an iambic pentameter Do it good, then you'll have me rushing to your bed after...
I've helped tidalnymph a lot with her writing over the last year and the original post of this was even more broken than this version. (she originally posted: in every commaS, dotS and dashES? SYNTAX inconsistency people... Ohioans don't f*****g talk like that. Believe me, I know.) Her syntax is definitive because English is not her first language, which is obvious here even with the incomplete edit WE did on it. This was her most popular poem with over a thousand views in a short time. Samantha was a member of DUP for quite a while and was fully exposed to that poem for ages. Why didn't she ever mention that it was plagiarized from her? She saw it every time someone commented on it, someone from her own username commented on the poem, she had full access to it as a member for a month at the very least; why did she never speak up? She took the blatantly original opener for one of jestalessa's poems and used it as the opener of one of her newly written ones. When confronted she denied it until she was shown (publicly) the poem by jestalessa, then admitted she might have taken it. jesta actually told Samantha she could have the line and decided to rewrite her own poem altogether. Samantha was also confronted (even by PierreTheMad whom she did get some permissions from) several times for not giving credit on untouched lines and ideas she had taken repeatedly from other members of DU. Rant over. I hope there is some justice here.
S. D., are you aware that Virgin has stolen from various other poets on DU and posted their work under preceding dates? She's taken lines from PierreTheMad, Jestalessa, Joss and others. Are all these people liars involved in some underhanded conspiracy against one insignificant poet? Come off it.
Okay Virgin, why don't you contact the melo site webmasters and ask them for proof of when your post was last modified? DUP has that feature so users can tell if someone is being devious. If you can prove without a shadow of a doubt that you posted the poem in 2007 I'll apologise and drop the matter. We're not all fucked. There's always a way of finding proof. Your explanations aren't proof, not yet.
Hm, Sam, I've had these idiots giving me trouble before as well. In fact in 2008 A guy called me a Pedophile and said I was not a writer at all.
This woman, tidalnymph, I've heard of her. She is not a very good writer, and only wants other people to feel sorry for her. I've been on this site since 2004, under numbers of Psudonims (which only 3 are still open) I have been friends with Sam for as long as I can remember. I remember the day she posted this poem, and for your information, tidalnymph did not become a member until just a few nights ago. I was watching the stats.
So, Mr.‘s. Harry Vaughn, Ray99, I will ask you-- Where are your writing's located at? I would just like to see what you have wrote, or do you just waist your time spamming what you think is the Un-Godly truth?
So, do you really feel like putting up with me, I am wso much smarter than either of you, and with Sam and I, how can you win over something you know nothing about?
~S. D. Blankenship
@ Harry Vaughn I Posted this poem on here 8 Months Ago again for the second time for which I have already explained why I had to and if your talking about the poem on melo well have you seen all the posts I have on that site things get lost and for you to even suggest that I replaced it gos to show how devious and sneaky you are and I never knew you could do that to a post can you even do that I mean really your not just saying that and if so thats kinda crappy that means anyone can do that, Frighting!! Im not angry with you I kinda understand your side but seriously you are wrong Im not gonna talk about this with you anymore I have been plagiarized several times and its none of your beeswax what concern is it of yours and if by what your saying there is no safety for anyone including you to post their poetry online so were all fucked right
@Virgin poet - You could have just edited an old poem posted then, replacing your original work with Delica's. Why in the years since 2007 has nobody else commented on the piece except recently when it was exposed as a theft? Threaten legal action all you like, it won't amount to anything.
People NEED to do their research they will see I wrote and posted it years before she claims to have written it she stole it from me and I can prove it and for your info I also had it on here until the webmaster deleted my work and many many other poets work as well by accident do your research b4 u start harassing someone here is the link to prove it and a link to a post I wrote after this site deleted a lot of work I suggest you read it oh and by the way ive been writing since I was in grade school and my teacher even had me published her name is Mrs Cathrine Little who is also a published poet and she had read my work so whatever
http://www.melodramatic.com/users/virginpoet/2007/dec/15/f**k-me-verses LOOK AT THE POSTING DATE
and here is the link to post to prove my work was deleted by accident off of here http://www.melodramatic.com/node/4855010
I will be talking with the webmaster for this site to see if they can be any help with this problem and I will be taking legal action against her and all of you for defamation of character
I respect the faith you have in your friends but I hope you really know them personally and are for sure 100% no doubt in your mine and are not just sticking up for someone you have only known from online and you just so happened to read her post first that would be really lame and sad for you because I will take action !!!!!
and another way I have to prove it .... I sent that poem and a few others in a message on myspace years ago to Beau Sia and he liked it and wrote me back so if you dont know who he is Look him up his work is awesome by the way
I WILL NOT TAKE THIS DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS MINE AND YOU ALL HAVE BEEN WARNED I WILL TAKE ACTION SO REVIEW CAREFULLY I WILL NOT BE REMOVING YOUR REVIEWS SO I WILL KNOW WHO YOU ARE!!!!!!!
People NEED to do their research they will see I wrote and posted it years before she claims to have written it she stole it from me and I can prove it and for your info I also had it on here until the webmaster deleted my work and many many other poets work as well by accident do your research b4 u start harassing someone here is the link to prove it and a link to a post I wrote after this site deleted a lot of work I suggest you read it oh and by the way ive been writing since I was in grade school and my teacher even had me published her name is Mrs Cathrine Little who is also a published poet and she had read my work so whatever
http://www.melodramatic.com/users/virginpoet/2007/dec/15/f**k-me-verses LOOK AT THE POSTING DATE
and here is the link to post to prove my work was deleted by accident off of here http://www.melodramatic.com/node/4855010
I will be talking with the webmaster for this site to see if they can be any help with this problem and I will be taking legal action and against them and all of you for defamation of character
I respect the faith you have in your friends but I hope you really know them and are not just sticking up for someone you have only known from online that would be really lame and sad for you because I will take action !!!!!
and another way I have to prove it .... I sent that poem in a message on myspace years ago to Beau Sia and he liked it and wrote me back so if you dont know who he is Look him up
I WILL NOT TAKE THIS DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS MINE AND YOU ALL HAVE BEEN WARNED I WILL TAKE ACTION SO REVIEW CAREFULLY i WILL NOT BE REMOVING YOUR REVIEWS SO I WILL KNOW WHO YOU ARE!!!!!!!
This poem was stolen from Jocelyn Delica, username tidalnymph. Here's the original: http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/12019/ If any of the other commenters see this before Campbell blocks me like the coward she is, please boycott her work so she can't carry on stealing from better writers.
Take this down right now. You've stolen this from a friend of mine.
You should be ASHAMED! Oh, forgot, if you could be ashamed you
wouldn't have stolen it in the first place. (And I'm guessing that goes
for embarrassed as well.) Hey, I know, tilt your head to the left and
listen to the angel, do what she tells you.
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