wrote this back in 2007 it was posted back when a lot of poems were lost on this site :(
Touch me in verses In lines, breaks and spaces In every comma dots and dashes, Think of me in my barest Then feel me deeply with your mind and senses... Love me in verses In haiku's, quatrains or sonnets With a pen and a sheet of paper Open up your mind, heart and soul Something you've never really done before... Or why don't you just kiss me in verses? Talk dirty to me in free verses or old fashion prose With your mind, I want you to explore what's in between my legs in an iambic pentameter Do it good, then you'll have me rushing to your bed after...
I've helped tidalnymph a lot with her writing over the last year and the original post of this was even more broken than this version. (she originally posted: in every commaS, dotS and dashES? SYNTAX inconsistency people... Ohioans don't f*****g talk like that. Believe me, I know.) Her syntax is definitive because English is not her first language, which is obvious here even with the incomplete edit WE did on it. This was her most popular poem with over a thousand views in a short time. Samantha was a member of DUP for quite a while and was fully exposed to that poem for ages. Why didn't she ever mention that it was plagiarized from her? She saw it every time someone commented on it, someone from her own username commented on the poem, she had full access to it as a member for a month at the very least; why did she never speak up? She took the blatantly original opener for one of jestalessa's poems and used it as the opener of one of her newly written ones. When confronted she denied it until she was shown (publicly) the poem by jestalessa, then admitted she might have taken it. jesta actually told Samantha she could have the line and decided to rewrite her own poem altogether. Samantha was also confronted (even by PierreTheMad whom she did get some permissions from) several times for not giving credit on untouched lines and ideas she had taken repeatedly from other members of DU. Rant over. I hope there is some justice here.
Again, this is tidalnymph reminding you Sam, to stop deluding yourself that this is your writing! And how dare you ruin the format of the poem, I wrote it on a certain format for a reason-- http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/12019/
And for all of you people defending her, this is what she said about the poem on the DUP site:
Written on 15th December 2010 12:35pm by Anonymous
"I LOVE this poem wish I had thought of it in the way you did. You should read my poem "Devour me" cause reading ur poem makes me feel like that all over again. You know the feeling of butterflys and all that excitement that comes with it well thats how I feel when I read a good poem Thanks for all that. I think I just fell in love a lil bit"
Again, please feel free to browse--http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/12019/
wow samantha thats crazy as hell dont let that faker get to you we know its your original work!!! man that just makes me want to remove my work completely online dont bother with the haters tell em to f**k off I sure will us true poets have to stick together I got ur back baby :)
@ Harry Vaughn I know PierreTheMad and he gave me permission to use the 2 or 3 lines of his poem and I gave him permission to use mine as well I had a page there till I deleted it and as for Jestalessa what are you claiming I stole lol
see there you go putting words in my mouth I never said anything about what I am going to to do OF COURSE IM going to dumb a*s do I need to tell you everything Im gonna do .... Ill be writing some today/ working on a previous poem I had posted til I marked it as private to rewrite it as a continued part from another one of my poems Ill prolly eat shower take walk give my mamaw her meds change her cancer bandages and maybe wipe my a*s after a s**t so who knows my days pretty full will you be needing updates than GET A LIFE!!! GROW UP!!! Bet you hear that a lot dont you
and as for the post on her so called poem my stupid sister made that comment she had no idea I wrote it but she knows now you do not know s**t so f**k off
funny your harassing S.D. now u gonna claim hes a thief as well
and how do we know your not a FAKE pretending NOT to be Jocelyn Delica, username tidalnymph to get symphony so make all the fake profiles you want your only wasting your time
@ Harry Vaughn I know PierreTheMad and he gave me permission to use the 2 or 3 lines of his poem and I gave him permission to use mine as well I had a page there till I deleted it and as for Jestalessa what are you claiming I stole lol
see there you go putting words in my mouth I never said anything about what I am going to to do OF COURSE I M dumb a*s do I need to tell you everything Im gonna do .... Ill be writing some today/ working on a previous poem I had posted til I marked it as private t rewrite it as a continued part from another one of my poems Ill prolly eat shower take walk give my mamaw her meds changer her cancer bandages and maybe wipe my a*s after a s**t so who knows my days pretty full will you be needing updates than GET A LIFE!!! GROW UP!!! Bet you hear that a lot dont you
and as for the post on her so called poem my stupid sister made that comment she had no idea I wrote it but she knows now you do not know s**t so f**k off funny your harassing S.D. now
and how do we know your not a FAKE pretending NOT to be Jocelyn Delica, username tidalnymph to get symphony so make all the fake profiles you want your only wasting your time
So in other words you're not going to contact the melo webmasters and bring us definite proof? Therefore you're admitting you're a thief? Bluster all you like, you've stolen before and you'll steal again unless you have the decency to admit what you've done and take all your stolen posts down. The broken English in this poem reflects Jocelyn's writing style, there are people who even remember your comment on the original piece. Here it is! http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/12019/ Scroll down and you'll find it's the comment which references your poem Devour Me, which can be found here: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/VirginPoet/659869/ I hope this is proof enough for your friend S. D.
Hm, Well, Mr. Harry Vaughn; She has never stolen any of my writings, and I write the worst sexual way possible. So, what you're saying is she is only -- according to you; a man with no posted writing's-- is saying she is attacking these woman, and their writings? Well, why would she just stop there? My writing's would be nice to call her own. Sam, would you like to have the rights to my poem Psych? or Virginity? >.< Gag! May be in some way she is using there writings, but hey. Aren’t we all using the creations of the father's?"
@ Harry Vaughn yes indeed we can always find proof but that dont mean a******s like you are gonna believe it now does it
people can believe what they want but that dont make them right I bet your the type who has to get the last word and who thinks they are always right about everything and I bet there are other people you are/were harassing and you must be the type who is never happy unless your putting someone down so you can have the last word big woop I dont care
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