F**k me in Verses

F**k me in Verses

A Poem by Samantha ~virginpoet
"

wrote this back in 2007 it was posted back when a lot of poems were lost on this site :(

"
Touch me in verses
In lines,
breaks and spaces
In every comma
dots and dashes,
Think of me
in my barest
Then feel me deeply
with your mind
and senses...
Love me in verses
In haiku's,
quatrains
or sonnets
With a pen
and a sheet of paper
Open up
your mind,
heart
and soul
Something you've
never really
done before...
Or why don't you just
kiss me in verses?
Talk dirty to me
in free verses
or old fashion
prose
With your mind,
I want you to explore
what's in between
my legs
in an iambic
pentameter
Do it good,
then you'll have me
rushing to your bed
after...

By Samantha Campbell

© 2012 Samantha ~virginpoet


Author's Note

Samantha ~virginpoet
I was searching for proof the poem is mine and woohooo I found some

FURTHER PROOF THE POEM IS MINE AND PROVES I POSTED IT ON MELO IN 2007 AND I DID NOT EDIT IT IN

SO FUCK OFF CRAZY STALKERS

fallow this link it will prove its mine
http://www.melodramatic.com/node/5378349

poetrygirl posted it on Thu.09.17.09 12:55pm

thanks for reading and reviewing.

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I've helped tidalnymph a lot with her writing over the last year and the original post of this was even more broken than this version. (she originally posted: in every commaS, dotS and dashES? SYNTAX inconsistency people... Ohioans don't f*****g talk like that. Believe me, I know.) Her syntax is definitive because English is not her first language, which is obvious here even with the incomplete edit WE did on it. This was her most popular poem with over a thousand views in a short time. Samantha was a member of DUP for quite a while and was fully exposed to that poem for ages. Why didn't she ever mention that it was plagiarized from her? She saw it every time someone commented on it, someone from her own username commented on the poem, she had full access to it as a member for a month at the very least; why did she never speak up? She took the blatantly original opener for one of jestalessa's poems and used it as the opener of one of her newly written ones. When confronted she denied it until she was shown (publicly) the poem by jestalessa, then admitted she might have taken it. jesta actually told Samantha she could have the line and decided to rewrite her own poem altogether. Samantha was also confronted (even by PierreTheMad whom she did get some permissions from) several times for not giving credit on untouched lines and ideas she had taken repeatedly from other members of DU. Rant over. I hope there is some justice here.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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@Poi aka Caustic aka Bella Donna aka Harry Vaughn aka Jil aka ...

you can claim to be who ever you like

yes I edited that poem so it would show the updated date of that I still wrote that poem

Just like on this site it shows the original date and the updated date

I have that poem posted else where and its dated in 2009 so whatever

YOU CANT CONFIRM ANYTHING JUST BY SAYING IT!!!! WHERE IS YOUR PROOF??? YOU CANT FIND ANY CAUSE I WROTE THAT POEM

if your the webmaster and you contacted them but never received a reply like that makes sense of course Sarah sioux would have replied if you indeed asked but you you didn't keep making all the fake pages you like it will just help me and we all know who you are

PLEASE YOU KEEP SAYING THE SAME THINGS OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER BLAH BLAH BLAH

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@Caustic aka Bella Donna aka Harry Vaughn aka Jil aka ...

Lies you are Caustic aka Bella Donna aka Harry Vaughn aka Jil aka tidalnymph aka ...

its my poem I wrote it Im tired of repeating myself so what if she wrote it differently what does that prove she just tried to make it her own by thinking she was improving on perfection

f**k me in verses is her most popular poem with over a thousand views no wonder I wrote it

yes I was a member for a very long time til I had little use of that site I found and fell in love with writerscafe so I deleted my page on DUP there was no exposing going on just because I removed my page does not mean I was saying I was a thief

Good question Why did I never mention that it was plagiarized from me will I NEVER knew she existed nor had my poem posted as her own my gawd there are thousands of poems on there you cant expect me to read every last one of them if so your more diluted than I thought how the hell would I see her work cause someone commented on it what planet do you live on... crazy and diluted land someone from my username virginpoet lol I cant be the only one who has that username

why did I never speak up? read the above

I have just been thru all her poems here all her first lines......

I watched the wake fold over itself
Whatever, whoever else
He's young and broad,
British press is with the rebel forces
You had me at 'muse'
The panic is wearing off and I'd love to say I'm left
Maybe it's in the exhale
Trying to progress
This pen doesn't like to drag
she smiles as morning breeze kisses her face
For fun
i. You want me dirty
I saw your face again for the first time
Catch me
I'm going to Burma.
Abandoned inside to thoughts
She doesn't whisper life to me
Here is disclosed my petty discontentment
electrical surge
You're gone
we wake together
if we were
Haughty eyes
"You can't do this to me,"
My bedroom:
Watched the preschool car pool
A living made by service-
Dusk unlaces
Water:
My grandfather's room
Status, please.
I'm draped here, half dressed, half hallucinating
I don't touch you
You don't inspire me with words today.
onfire light
She blazes
If I could lure
Turn time, Angel
Breached, pervaded
It's all so easy. All there in the numbers.
I can't fall asleep
I'm still reeling; hunted by his words written in lust,
Hit me again.
(Sudden stop in heartbeat,
Sweet angel's blood
Sounds:
I've become obsessed- haunted by his words. Written in

those are all her first lines none of which Ive ever used and if you were meaning the words "DEVOUR ME" come on get real like those 2 words have never been thrown together before

I never admitted I might have taken it!!! All I said was the same as above ... Im not the first or last to put those 2 words together

as for being told I could have the line, 2 words by using the word line your trying to make it sound longer and yes she told me I could use the 2 words devour me because she loved my poem

I was never confronted by PierreTheMad I asked if I could use 2 of his lines he said sure as long as I can do the same and I complied but I made his lines mine made them mean something else said something else

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http://www.melodramatic.com/users/virginpoet/2007/dec/15/f**k-me-verses

Wed.09.28.11 11:20am

I can confirm that "virginpoet" has indeed stolen this poem.

I am the webmaster of Deep Underground Poetry and I signed up to this website a while back to try and substantiate her claims. It seems that with this blogging site you can completely modify an old post and no modification date shows up. It's a very bad way to run a website. I contacted melodramatic about this but never received a reply. I would be happy to speak to them about this matter.

I know for a fact that "virginpoet" did not write this poem, because she commented on it on Deep Underground Poetry on 15th December saying:

"I LOVE this poem wish I had thought of it in the way you did. You should read my poem "Devour me" cause reading ur poem makes me feel like that all over again. You know the feeling of butterflys and all that excitement that comes with it well thats how I feel when I read a good poem Thanks for all that. I think I just fell in love a lil bit"

She then tried to delete this comment and claim she wrote the poem herself. When confronted with this evidence, she claimed to have "forgot" she wrote the poem at the time of posting this comment.

In the end I banned/suspended her DU Poetry account as she had also deluded herself that she had written a number of other poems written by other people.


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hm, i thought your sister wrote that comment. damn, lady. foiled again.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I also recall a poem that may very well have been plagiarized from Samantha, and that DU user got it good from Ms. Campbell. Samantha did not mince words in dealing with that piece of plagiarism very quickly, and the user removed the poem. Now, I suppose, there is her pride at stake.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've helped tidalnymph a lot with her writing over the last year and the original post of this was even more broken than this version. (she originally posted: in every commaS, dotS and dashES? SYNTAX inconsistency people... Ohioans don't f*****g talk like that. Believe me, I know.) Her syntax is definitive because English is not her first language, which is obvious here even with the incomplete edit WE did on it. This was her most popular poem with over a thousand views in a short time. Samantha was a member of DUP for quite a while and was fully exposed to that poem for ages. Why didn't she ever mention that it was plagiarized from her? She saw it every time someone commented on it, someone from her own username commented on the poem, she had full access to it as a member for a month at the very least; why did she never speak up? She took the blatantly original opener for one of jestalessa's poems and used it as the opener of one of her newly written ones. When confronted she denied it until she was shown (publicly) the poem by jestalessa, then admitted she might have taken it. jesta actually told Samantha she could have the line and decided to rewrite her own poem altogether. Samantha was also confronted (even by PierreTheMad whom she did get some permissions from) several times for not giving credit on untouched lines and ideas she had taken repeatedly from other members of DU. Rant over. I hope there is some justice here.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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Jed
I just browsed dp and her work lol what crap as samantha said no where near that caliber of writing

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How many fake pages is this girl gonna make lame if you ask me question we should all be asking why hasnt she posted her own work me thinks its not up to par

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@Bella Donna aka Harry Vaughn aka Jil aka ...

oh Ive contacted the webmasters as well way before you

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@Bella Donna aka Harry Vaughn aka Jil aka ...

yeah your format my words my poem just cause you changed it does not make it your work

How many times do I have to say IT WAS NOT ME who said that it was my stupid sister trying to get back at me it. the comment was left by Anonymous anyone could have said that and why would I review that poem if I was planing to steal it makes no sense

Yes PLEASE feel free to browse her work it only proves shes a thief and no where near that caliber of writing

she keeps making new pages every time I block her half the time being her self and the other half made up people

and if I had anything to hide wouldn't I delete all the bad reviews I left them cause it helps prove I did not steal that poem

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and before you block me again I just want to let you know that I've already contacted the webmaster of this site and if I were you I'll just delete this and all the copies of the poem on other sites 'cos I will never stop 'til you delete every single trace of my words, which you STOLEN!

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