F**k me in Verses

wrote this back in 2007 it was posted back when a lot of poems were lost on this site :(

Touch me in verses
In lines,
breaks and spaces
In every comma
dots and dashes,
Think of me
in my barest
Then feel me deeply
with your mind
and senses...
Love me in verses
In haiku's,
quatrains
or sonnets
With a pen
and a sheet of paper
Open up
your mind,
heart
and soul
Something you've
never really
done before...
Or why don't you just
kiss me in verses?
Talk dirty to me
in free verses
or old fashion
prose
With your mind,
I want you to explore
what's in between
my legs
in an iambic
pentameter
Do it good,
then you'll have me
rushing to your bed
after...

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

I was searching for proof the poem is mine and woohooo I found some

FURTHER PROOF THE POEM IS MINE AND PROVES I POSTED IT ON MELO IN 2007 AND I DID NOT EDIT IT IN

SO FUCK OFF CRAZY STALKERS

fallow this link it will prove its mine
http://www.melodramatic.com/node/5378349

poetrygirl posted it on Thu.09.17.09 12:55pm

thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviews

[caustic]

I've helped tidalnymph a lot with her writing over the last year and the original post of this was even more broken than this version. (she originally posted: in every commaS, dotS and dashES? SYNTAX inconsistency people... Ohioans don't f*****g talk like that. Believe me, I know.) Her syntax is definitive because English is not her first language, which is obvious here even with the incomplete edit WE did on it. This was her most popular poem with over a thousand views in a short time. Samantha was a member of DUP for quite a while and was fully exposed to that poem for ages. Why didn't she ever mention that it was plagiarized from her? She saw it every time someone commented on it, someone from her own username commented on the poem, she had full access to it as a member for a month at the very least; why did she never speak up? She took the blatantly original opener for one of jestalessa's poems and used it as the opener of one of her newly written ones. When confronted she denied it until she was shown (publicly) the poem by jestalessa, then admitted she might have taken it. jesta actually told Samantha she could have the line and decided to rewrite her own poem altogether. Samantha was also confronted (even by PierreTheMad whom she did get some permissions from) several times for not giving credit on untouched lines and ideas she had taken repeatedly from other members of DU. Rant over. I hope there is some justice here.

[rebellefleur]

@Ladeeanee-- that was by far the most narrow minded, hypocritical rant I've ever heard! If you say something in real life, I can't see why you shouldn't say it in poetry the way it f****n' is. Poetry is always about honesty!

@Sam-- I'm just so sick of you! Obviously you need a shrink.

[hotdamn]

The same can't be said for tidalnymph. She only published it on Deep Underground where they show a modification date as well as the original post date.......

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@LadeeAnne~ ' Pas de due.. I respect your opinion thanks for sharing it just wanted to let you know I only use that language in my writing no one has ever heard that word from my mouth. I am sorry you are getting bitched at for your opinion craziness

@tammytownend SHAME ON YOU

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

If the webmaster had not accidentally deleted the wrong folder I would not have had to re add my work and it would have been further proof that I wrote and posted it long before she did

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@Jess yes I have blocked ppl but that has nothing to do with what is going oh here.

How did I deny that it happened did you assume I denied it cause I said I never used it what was I supposed to remember about it when I never even had a look at it

I never denied talking to you I did know it was you there are so many usernames and same names how does anyone keep track unless you say hey it is me .....

I have the messages as well I never delete messages

Yes I told them I forgot I wrote it I was in a bad car accident and it messed up my memory for a while I than told them my sister wrote it cause I remembered. and when has it ever been a crime or proof of lies just cause someone forgets something who knows maybe thats a new rule

yes I was banned/suspended so how the hell am I being accused of plagiarizing new work from there think about that you or anyone can say your the MOD. They still banned me without talking to me and like I have said it was a while since I was on that site so she could have talked to me on facebook to let me know what was happening I WAS NEVER BANNED FOR REPEATED PLAGIARISM it was over the same poem Im getting s**t on now I did not care I was banned I did not plan on using that site again

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

@hotdamn I never replaced it and it is not my fault for the way they made their website. To what you said the same can be said for the girl who is claiming it is hers so keep that in mind. That is why I have only been posting here because it shows the new editing date along with the original posting date.

[Matthew Kult]

Well Writen, I do like the format better on Deep Underground. I'll leave it to the two of you to decide who it belongs too, but the piece is quite excellent.


Matthew Kult

[hotdamn]

Thought I would add to all the "reasonable cause" that has been provided. What the hell, right? The link to this poem from AllPoetry.com in April of 2009 is just as easily faked as the post at melodramatic.com. The Webmistress's comment would apply there as well, as a modified post shows no modification date when updated. She easily could have replaced an old post with this poem.

[tammytownend]

F**k off LadeeAnne, no-one gives a f**k about your stupid, dated opinions and repressed sexuality. I love Dickinson, have read Whitman and Yeats. Whitman was very sensual in his verse, Dickinson dealt with despair. Poetry is about connecting with a higher plain of consciousness through language. Foul language can be a part of that. Dickinson's poems explored violence and suicide. Yet she made those topics beautiful, created a luscious reality using them. And if she can do that, why can't f**k and c**t and piss and s**t be made beautiful? If you don't understand that, then you're the thickie who doesn't know real poetry.
Also, if you don't want to read worked marked mature, then don't f*****g read it.