Things seldom change. People change and grow so that their perspectives alter and become less severe as years go by. Hopefully, we become less hard on others as we become more accepting of the skins we live in. I remember one fellow saying that when he was sixteen his father was an idiot but by the time he reached 21 he was shocked by how much his father had learned in only five short years. (laughing)
The words have poured out deep within from your heart. Some people think its easy to be a writer; just put in the words, frame it. But bringing life to our thoughts through the words and trying to keep the purity and meaning framed together is a tedious job.
Oh! how foolish of those who think that they can scratch a thing and call it an art.
It takes dedication, passion and sheer love to be a poet or writer.
Wow, very deep and insightful. This lays out the perfect picture of how, as a writer, it feels when our work is created and how joyous yet frustrating the process can be. The end result being one with ourselves. Very well written!
This was very deep, and written straight from your heart.
I like what you are saying in this piece, sometimes it feels like sad heartbreaking pieces have more deep emotion, they are more meaningful, so they make great poetry.
Although when everything is great in your life, and your so happy, sure you can write happy poetry, though sometimes its hard to make that as deep and meaningful.
I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Well written
Keep writing :)
But in truth
I am ... I was
the fractured
damaged creature
who only thought
she knew what
poetry was
-This part I truly love and this is a great stanza, that pulls the reader in very deep into the poem its self. It really speaks to the reader that each poet has and is a fractured damaged creature, who only thought they knew what poetry, really was. I wanna rate this poem a 95, maybe just add a little bit more imagery but this a pretty piece.
i can identify with this, when i feel happy, its much harder to write poetry or anything for that matter, it's funny how that happens. This is really good though and i like how you expressed yourself in it.
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