This poetry is idealistic love. I think few find this type of love in this labyrinth of life.
I felt the volume of an all consuming dedication to love completely.
Well done. The lines pulled my eye down t he page and my heart was still with the anticipation of the nest thought.
Breathtaking is not too strong a word I think.
To me this speaks of a love that was once tempestuous, dramatic. The fire that once existed has abated but is one that will glow for a lifetime and beyond this life. It's a true case of two becoming one and truly committing to each other. Beautiful words!
This poem was about so many things Jennie, And all very personal things. As I always write from my h.. read moreThis poem was about so many things Jennie, And all very personal things. As I always write from my heart and my inspiration comes from my life.
8 Years Ago
It's easy to tell that your writing comes from the heart. I enjoyed this poem very much.
8 Years Ago
Thanks again ... I need to get back to reviewing it's just that I have so little time anymore and ha.. read moreThanks again ... I need to get back to reviewing it's just that I have so little time anymore and happily so lol life is good but hectic Silas will be 2 on the 29th and Stephen will be 28 on the 7th anyway I still write mostly jotting down verses that will grow into poems when I have time to plant them on the page lol but this was a poem made me set and write it down
I expected several libraries to this, a number of views, reviews..this is so so good samantha, I enjoyed each line from the start to the end. Bravo
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you :) I post my work for others to read and maybe be inspired I care not for reviews not my p.. read moreThank you :) I post my work for others to read and maybe be inspired I care not for reviews not my purpose for writing but reviews are nice and helpful can't lie about that
The poem is awesome, Samantha. Very unfortunate, I'm not good in love poem but always in enamored with it, If not I would've review this poem poetically. Maybe, I'll learn that through your adorable poems. But why did you mislead the audience with the title - Coffin heart?
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8 Years Ago
Thank you and to answer your question about my title well this poem and a lot of my poetry is about .. read moreThank you and to answer your question about my title well this poem and a lot of my poetry is about my husband.
Women from his past messed him up so bad he did not know what real love was he did not know how to love or let someone show him love like his heart was dead. It has been a long road to open him up bring down his walls to let me truly inside and coffin hearts represents rebirth.
I never wanted to nor tried to change him just be there and help him see the man he was the man he was hiding the heart he was protecting he was killing in his self made prison that he was only further hurting himself
He is a poet here his work use to be dark about death and pain but his style changed for the better its more than darkness there is love in his poetry now he don't post much here anymore because of this sites troll he now mainly posts on Instagram
a tribute to the man you will send your life with,loved it !
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8 Years Ago
any time you piece of s**t,the officer at the mchenry police dept is always ready for me to send you.. read moreany time you piece of s**t,the officer at the mchenry police dept is always ready for me to send your bull s**t,lol what about that dis honorable discharge you received.army life to much? we could call yo momma or your sister and see if your off your meds again .davy
HAD MY BABY BOY 12/29/2013 at 10:57 he weighs 8 pounds 4oz 19 in long
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