If I Forget

If I should ever lose my memory
please remind me of the things I love

If one day I forget to tell you
I love you I hope you'll still feel it
in the embrace of my touch

My love please remind me
of my need to write poetry
so I don't forget how to breathe

If one day I forget to tell you
I love you I hope you'll feel it
in the breath of my kiss

If one day I forget to tell you
I love you I hope you'll see it in my eyes

in that certain longing gaze

My love please remind me

to rub your back til you fall to sleep

and tell me how I find peace

in the beating of your heart

Tell me the things I never
would think I could forget

Like the first time you said I love you
or the moment you asked me to marry you
even the birth of our child

Remind me of all the little things
of all the passion and love we share

Please my love don't let me forget
the things that are so deeply embedded in bone
that I will suffer from the tip of the tongue complex
speak them to me softly in an I love you tone

But please love let me forget
all the bad memories and heartache

Fill me with all the happiness
we have shared

Tell me the first word our son spoke
and don't lie and say it was Dada
cause as I am now we both know it was Mama

What ever you do don't let me fade into
the darkness so deep that nothing exists
in my mind and in my heart

You are a story teller a poet
whisper to me of all the things
you and I would never want to forget

My love please remind me of us

Tell me the story of ...

By Samantha and Stephen Pruitt

Author's Note

A collaboration between husband and wife

Stephens Sister in law asked me to write her a poem for a presentation and that it had to be about alzheimer's

Reviews

[KeeD]

This was beautiful, it was the will to fight the building tension of the tragic disease that is Alzheimer's but it was more than that it was the only request that ever counted for I would never want to float in the darkness not knowing what your touch feels like. This piece touched my heart, great collaboration you two.. you are indeed two souls united as one.

[TL Boehm]

this is a touching and real write. Beautifully penned.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

This sounds so familiar I remember writing a letter to one of my exes and I also like wrote her stuff esp. on remembering stuf and at the end of the week she ccame back to me and she was like talking out all the stuff we went through really motional :)
A real good write and I thank you for sharing :)

[Avinash]

Seamless collaboration and it made me smile at the end of every stanza. Please do it often, whenever you guys get time :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It is so easy to become complacent in a relationship and that is the quickest way to kill a love that should live forever. We take advantage of the fact they are there until one day they are gone.

I see in the notes what this is about but it can be a lesson to all of us to appreciate what we have when we have love.

[Mila]

Very nice work. I'm not a poetry person so critiquing a poem is not my forte, but this was very well done.

[wordman]

sounds like the note book movie and a great job you did on it
a pleasant write

[B-poet]

This is an amazing sentimental poem. Loved the considerate emotional depth from start to finish. Great work. A touching masterpiece. :)

[Meraki]

I want to grow old with someone now.. this poem brought warm feelingsand nostalgic memories I'm not sure are mine lol.