Premature Ending

Bleed your
worth to me
in vintage fields
of cotton and silk
that bloom verses

As night descends
the darkness bends
around your troubled mind
tugging at the strings
of a heart tied tight
to pen and pain

Bound to a premature ending
your drowning in your own mind
I can see all the truth your bending
your afraid of the secrets I will find

Why be so scared

Why hide who you are

Why cover your flaws

Cause I want to love
the broken parts of you

Come out of your darkness
come out of that lonely void
and let me love all of you

I see the scars
that vandalize
your skin

I'm not blind
to the pain you feel

Tis a great desire
of human beings

When both burn
fully entwined

Be it that I found love
drowned in lies and heart ache

A passion upon pain
that I bloomed from

But

The tales of
your choice
converting in a dance
beneath a deceitful love
with devil breaths

As angels cry

Poet your quill violates
the wings hidden by shadows
the angel does weep
behind the clouds

Before the past
could endure
their pain

Love was
renewed
restored

More

Just so f*****g
much more

The darkness
chases us all
turning this
imagination
into words
only we
would
know

There they are
haunting and dark
blood dripping from their
indentations on the page of hearts

I want your real heart
the one that hides behind
the deceitful dark decaying
beating abyss inside of your chest

Those words I said
those words you wrote

Are but mere reflections of echoes
of a love so true even Edgar Allen Poe and Annabell Lee
could never dissever my soul from your soul

Even when pen and pain
send tendrils of ink
to probe my
darkest
fear

That the sea inside of me
will never drown
your demons
down under

And love
and pen
both

Run dry



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Inda]

This is fantastic, so much expressed here, such a longing to love the other who cannot open up entirely out of shame or guilt or fear and to see the power of the voice that says, it's ok, i don't mind those rough edges, in fact i understand they are part of you and so i love them too. That is what this pice reflects more than anything, that love that is bigger than even your love of poetry or literature. Fantastic job!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Much thanks I don't even know if he gets that but I'm patient and I have wrote a poem about loving him more than any words that flow out of my pen I love him enough to sacrifice my own happiness just for his like our car broke down last night and we had bought concert tickets to see Alice in Chains this Saturday He loves them and I have never in my life been to a concert he has been to many anyway I told him to ask around on facebook if anyone wanted to go with him so they would drive and he could go and have fun while I sat at home alone with our 4 month old with no phone or tv I don't know if he even gets what I was willing to do for him but we get to go after all so :) I'm happy if he is happy and I love him more than he could ever imagine

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

How stupid are you why would anyone make fake pages to discredit me who best to answer than than you who are the only one doing so I am a mother to a 16 month old as you well know as if I have time to waste on fake a*s pages I barley have time to post any of my work on here let alone create mass fake pages .... So in your eyes anyone and everyone who has stood up for me is a fake your so funny Charlie the site mod and owner of wc has all the proof he needs that all my work is all mine and so is my husbands the fact that we are still here proves that more than anything I could ever say

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

You can claim temporary all you want fact is it was not and I have not taken any of my work down what so ever and I never will remove any of MY work

You should know I have contacted Charlie via FB and you will be banned

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

and keep sending me mass messages Ill not read a one

[Astro]

Undeniable

[Wynter Ignatius]

"Bound to a premature ending
your drowning in your own mind
I can see all the truth your bending
your afraid of the secrets I will find"

Wonderful - simply wonderful.

[ReneeJ]

This is really deep and powerful, especially when read with passion. The errors with you're and your stopped me a few times, but otherwise I loved it, really beautiful.

[Chloe_Spence]

Absolutely beautiful Samantha, you never fail to please!

[Margo Seuss]

This is probably one of my favorite poems that I have read from you! I really loved the poem Annabel Lee from Edgar Alan Po, so I appreciate the reference!
"Are but mere reflections of echoes
of a love so true even Edgar Allen Poe and Annabell Lee
could never dissever my soul from your soul"
Flawless! I just noticed a few little techinical things. A few times you used the wrong your. Other than that, you beautifully portrayed the pain felt by a couple. Lovely!

[Stevo The POE-t]

If we could have a love like what was displayed for Annabelle Lee then we will be alright in the long run

[NoelHC]

A very good poem, a few problems with the your and you're, but heartfelt and emotional. Well done!