Poetic Bullshit

You're such an idiot
that you think high IQ's
revolve around your c**k

But I am curious
will it make me smarter
if i suck it

Does your dick
contain the seeds
of knowledge

Or generations
of the like minded
arrogant male species

If I deep throat
the tyranny of your words
to the bowels of your lust
til its exploding black ink slithering down
the path of post mortem
destruction

I always find myself
at the edges
of poetry

The epitome
is a poetic
fist verse

But I Never allow
my mind to wander
to far out of sight

Sex has become so dirty
so technical so self-broadcast
that there is no love
it is seen as a means
to get off

But sex is love
if done right
its two souls
becoming one

Thus releasing
the most powerful
orgasm known

This is why most girls
never cum they lack
the mind body connection

But the hu(Man) species
fail on an epic scale
to know what real
love truly is

This is why
wo(Men)

Will never be
understood

This is why
hu(Man)ity is so stupid

Cause they are scared
little boys waring grown a*s men
 
To afraid to
show and share
what they feel

They say that's gay
but smother under the weight
of unreleased emotions
choking on their own dicks

My son
will be a real man

He will know
how to love

He wont be crushed
under the weight
of the male persona



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Mike Emil]

I don't think anything about my huge iq
but I do think about
what seems to be a very nice offer
on your part
HAI!!!

[Michael Stevens]

Well, shocking! Brutally honest!

[Konigin]

Awesome! It was f*****g awesome! (excuse my language ^.^) I loved it. This piece of work is nothing but truth and raw emotion! BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Chloe_Spence]

This was powerful- a nice sort of girl power poem!
I loved the meaning behind it and I like how you emphasized on the meaning of true love between two people- I agree with you on this one :)
Well done, Samantha!

[Coyote Poetry]

When a man think with the wrong head. He gets in trouble.
"He wont be crushed
under the weight
of the male persona"
I like the poem a lot. Parent had great responsibility. We teach our children the right or wrong way to live. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

Im trying something new with reviews. Tell me if you cant read my handwriting and also I apologize in advance if I hurt your feelings.

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[wordman]

dam I hope I`m not on that train

[Cory Barrett]

............................................ZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jennie Baron]

Yes, extremely clever. You certainly cut to the heart of both the war between the sexes and the pride that makes us hide our love from the ones we love best. Don't you wish we could just dispense with all that BS and live in love as we ought to?

[Lyn Anderson]

yay GIRL POWER you rock and I love it. Straight in the faves. You do this kind of nasty down and dirty clever so well. Thanks for sharing.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I just want to say thank you so much for all your reviews and I promise to return the favor as soon as I can but just a heads up Im not so good a reviewing all the time