Give Me

I should tell you
about these
nasty little
monsters
inside
of my
head

My love
for you is
infinite

But my
thoughts
still linger

Out into a universe
where sex is still
complicated and
everyone is easy

Give me
complicated

Give me
an unmarred
collarbone
and eager fingers

Give me
arguments
and broken hearts

Because

Because
in the end
I won't truly live
without the even sound
of your heartbeats
beneath my sheets

I have a love
worth fighting for



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Stevo The POE-t]

You have a way with words girl... You paint a vivid picture with them that most painters could not even turn into a "Masterpiece." I am really glad I get the pleasure of watching your fingers turn words into such a beautiful work of art... In this piece you can feel the starvation for love and sex this woman feels...

I love the line "I won't truly live without the even sound of your heartbeats."

Just fantastic girl

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Thanks your reviews mean a lot to me as you are a poet of few spoken words ... That poem was based around that line it came to me one morning as I was laying next to you listening to the sound of your heart as it beat out the silence that is killing me

[kublakhan27]

This truly captures the essence of a relationship. There's no such thing as a perfect relationship - at least I don't think there is - and you've captured that sentiment wonderfully and vividly here. I was glad to see the happy ending, though I would have related to it either way no doubt. Powerful piece you've penned here.

[wordman]

rhythm of a heart beat sexual emotions of love after an emotional ride

[Lyn Anderson]

I love your way of thinking, and stringing it all together

[Jack...]

This was wonderful Samatha. You speak your mind and your heart and do so in a very convincing fashion. It is almost as if I could hear your voice as I read this today.