Into Poetry

Into my rawest
thoughts I delve
as my sensuality
seduces brain cells

Into my rawest
desires I fall
revealing all

Hold me tight
and kiss me hard

As I descend

As I fall

As I dive and ebb

Into poetry

Because words
can only describe
so much

How could you feel
what I have been feeling

I spoke to words
so softly they were stolen
in the wind

Many years have passed
I still await the sound

I am harboring
satin stitches
behind my lips
so that they
don’t spill

Into
poetry

Into
you



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Susannah Rae]

"I spoke to words so softly, they were stolen in the wind" - beautiful! Love your metaphors and imagery throughout. Also, "harboring satin stitches behind my lips so that they don't spill", pure words fitted together perfectly. I believe that poetry is saying something difficult in a very simple way and you really do that so nicely, especially in this piece. strong, strong work!

[Lyn Anderson]

Fantastic verse - as always, poetic license but I am wondering, reveling in all? or revealing all?

[MsJewel]

I spoke to words
so softly they were stolen
in the wind

Your imagery in this beautiful poem is quite lovely....soft and swee. An enjoyable read!
:) Julie

[BL]

I have read this through a few times and it is delicious

[Justine]

"harboring satin stitches behind my lips" - what a great line, I love that! You did a good job here with lovely sentiments and written in fine form. That's a superb ending too, making for a good read. Justine

[Charisma]

That is a beautiful poem. I have read it over n over. Great write.

[wordman]

this is a beautiful love poem yearning wanting great job

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

Nice work. Keep on the good work

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

Nice piece. Keep on the good work

[Bob Sherunkle]

Damn fine writing.Going into my library

[shawnt5604]

beautiful!!!! :P...........