Into Poetry

Into my rawest
thoughts I delve
as my sensuality
seduces brain cells

Into my rawest
desires I fall
revealing all

Hold me tight
and kiss me hard

As I descend

As I fall

As I dive and ebb

Into poetry

Because words
can only describe
so much

How could you feel
what I have been feeling

I spoke to words
so softly they were stolen
in the wind

Many years have passed
I still await the sound

I am harboring
satin stitches
behind my lips
so that they
don’t spill

Into
poetry

Into
you



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Susannah Rae]

"I spoke to words so softly, they were stolen in the wind" - beautiful! Love your metaphors and imagery throughout. Also, "harboring satin stitches behind my lips so that they don't spill", pure words fitted together perfectly. I believe that poetry is saying something difficult in a very simple way and you really do that so nicely, especially in this piece. strong, strong work!

[melissa]

Amazing poem keep them coming

[FlatLineBeauty]

I really enjoyed this Samantha. Good write. xo Winter

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. The good description took the reader to good thoughts and good places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Michael Stevens]

Such honest, heartfelt emotion in this excellent poem!

[Mike Emil]

raw is good
raw is honest
HAI!!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A simple and breath taking piece that speaks to your readers, well done, good read.

[Akshay Rawal]

I love TRUE LOVE! We can wait for our love to turn up for so many years!...This poem tells me that love is far beyond everything....!

Short, sweet, and to the point, and you got your point across in an intriguing manner that was unexpected and flowed adequately. A great piece.

[Wolven]

A beautiful piece of writing Samantha, truly beautiful. I love that verse:

"I spoke to words
so softly they were stolen
in the wind..."

You've got such a brilliant use of metaphors in here, and the imagery seems so weightless to me.
I reckon this is one of your better poems to date. Keep this stuff up.