Heavy Heart Beats Primal Rhythms

I read
the music
on your skin
beat out
primal
rhythms
like
heart
beats

I want to
embrace
those senses
as you lose
yourself
in the creativity
of your passions
I want to touch
those words as your
pulse beats
at the tip
of my pen

Edge of my heart
a verse repeats
at the side of my lip
a tone vibrates

I am in love

But

Am

I

Worth

Losing

Poetry is
heartbroken words
fainted expressions
initially sentences
trembled
finally
twisted and
fragmented with
metaphors
hidden
meanings
lost

In every
Heart Beats
Primal Rhythms



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Anne Lockhart]

This poem really blew me away. There are a great deal of poems out there that are like this, but this one in particular spoke to me. The use of spaces in between words in the fourth stanza added a dramatic effect, and to me, it's one of the strongest points in your poem. However, I believe that the strongest is when you said "Poetry is / heartbroken words / fainted expressions / initially sentences / trembled / finally / twisted and / fragmented with / metaphors / hidden / meanings / lost". I can relate to this illustration. You're right when you say that poetry is heartbroken words and fainted expressions. At least that's what it is for me most of the time. Well done! This is an incredible piece.

[genocide]

that's very good hon love it you have a future in poetry

[Sami Khalil]

"Poetry is
heartbroken words
fainted expressions
initially sentences
trembled
finally
twisted and
fragmented with
metaphors
hidden
meanings
lost

In every
Heart Beats
Primal Rhythms"

I like poetry and those primal rhythms...A well written poem...:)......................

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Much thanks

[Sami Khalil]

Much welcomes...:)................

[Charisma]

As always a great write from a beautiful poet. As poetry is a way to express the meaning of love or heartbreak or anything we are going through at the time. I love it.