I know this might come across in the wrong way, but I have to speak my mind. This is quite possibly your single greatest poem thatwhich you have shared with us to date.
The sheer scale of the imagery and language here is staggering, and the amount of emotion and effort that has been packed into every word is phenomenal. Someone once told me that it is the wrters and poets who are so ill at ease, depressed or distressed who write the best poems and stories.
Sufficed to say, I have next to no experience whatsoever in the fields that are elaborated upon in this poem. Bad breakups, bad history, heartbreak, etc. but I can safely say that we all have our demons, Samantha, and I feel I can empathise with you in your sufferings; and no matter what life throws at us, we have to overcome them.
Looking at the end of it, all I can add is this.
Don't give up.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Writing poetry for me is a form of therapy because I bottle everything up. If I did not have poetry .. read moreWriting poetry for me is a form of therapy because I bottle everything up. If I did not have poetry as a release for all of it I'd ... I don't know what would happen, Poetry is a lifeline that keeps my heart beating and poetry is the glue that holds the shattered pieces together. In person I hold back its like words get stuck in my throat being drowned by emotion gripping my voice box strangling everything I yearn to speak. But when I write it pours in floods raging with rippling waters. People I know think that when I get quiet I'm mad but really I'm mostly hurt and don't want them to see the tears I'm fighting from overwhelming me, Its not that I care if people see me cry it's that I don't want to hurt them ... because it hurts me more I'm just weird I guess but than again I like weird so
Being pregnant it is so much harder to put that wall up and hide, so tears have been making their escape and I hate it! I'm not able to swallow it all down as easily and regurgitate words
Thank you so much for your review it is deeply appreciated.
11 Years Ago
I think any form of therapy or release is a good thing, be it writing, sex, crying a bit, or a set o.. read moreI think any form of therapy or release is a good thing, be it writing, sex, crying a bit, or a set of bongos. It helps us retain our sanity, provided we don’t get carried away with our method.
I’ve had my own bad hand. From a young age I was bullied for all sorts of things, my height, my name, my religious enthusiasm, and my lack of confidence/experience with girls (Including a bad case of ‘unrequited love’ you could say…). It got to the point last year where I literally heard voices in my head, they tried to convince me to go back on everything I’ve ever believed amongst some other disturbing areas I’d rather not mention… but lemme tell you: that scared me. Since then, I’ve started at the Belfast Met’ College. I’ve met loads of new, uber cool people there from similar but different backgrounds as me. I’m also much happier than I was last year.
My point is: Life gets Better. Trust me when I say there’s light ahead of you Samantha. That kid inside you will probably be the single greatest thing to ever happen to you. Don’t dismiss any future relationships with guys, I’d like to ask that. I’d like to think we have some redeeming qualities like. I’m glad you appreciate my review btw. Its quite nice to feel appreciated.
You are a gifted poet. You write from the pain in your soul and heart. It is obvious in everything you write. There are times that you share exquisite joy and then there are times that you rip the readers heart out. You can do this because you feel everything you write. We are passengers on the ship you journey on. I love your work and I have missed reading it. Keep writing and I will always keep reading.
I have seen the heartbreak of your last year and want it to change so much for you. Your heart overflows with love and passion, and you deserve an equal who allows you to discover your beauty and untamed fires within. xo
You are a Poet. My friend. The poem get down and dirty in the honesty of a relationship. I had to read again. I like the honest and direct feel of the poem. To make a love work. Take two people with the desire of fulfilling each other needs and want. The past is gone. Real lover love the people in their arms and is thankful for someone who have concern. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote
I know this might come across in the wrong way, but I have to speak my mind. This is quite possibly your single greatest poem thatwhich you have shared with us to date.
The sheer scale of the imagery and language here is staggering, and the amount of emotion and effort that has been packed into every word is phenomenal. Someone once told me that it is the wrters and poets who are so ill at ease, depressed or distressed who write the best poems and stories.
Sufficed to say, I have next to no experience whatsoever in the fields that are elaborated upon in this poem. Bad breakups, bad history, heartbreak, etc. but I can safely say that we all have our demons, Samantha, and I feel I can empathise with you in your sufferings; and no matter what life throws at us, we have to overcome them.
Looking at the end of it, all I can add is this.
Don't give up.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Writing poetry for me is a form of therapy because I bottle everything up. If I did not have poetry .. read moreWriting poetry for me is a form of therapy because I bottle everything up. If I did not have poetry as a release for all of it I'd ... I don't know what would happen, Poetry is a lifeline that keeps my heart beating and poetry is the glue that holds the shattered pieces together. In person I hold back its like words get stuck in my throat being drowned by emotion gripping my voice box strangling everything I yearn to speak. But when I write it pours in floods raging with rippling waters. People I know think that when I get quiet I'm mad but really I'm mostly hurt and don't want them to see the tears I'm fighting from overwhelming me, Its not that I care if people see me cry it's that I don't want to hurt them ... because it hurts me more I'm just weird I guess but than again I like weird so
Being pregnant it is so much harder to put that wall up and hide, so tears have been making their escape and I hate it! I'm not able to swallow it all down as easily and regurgitate words
Thank you so much for your review it is deeply appreciated.
11 Years Ago
I think any form of therapy or release is a good thing, be it writing, sex, crying a bit, or a set o.. read moreI think any form of therapy or release is a good thing, be it writing, sex, crying a bit, or a set of bongos. It helps us retain our sanity, provided we don’t get carried away with our method.
I’ve had my own bad hand. From a young age I was bullied for all sorts of things, my height, my name, my religious enthusiasm, and my lack of confidence/experience with girls (Including a bad case of ‘unrequited love’ you could say…). It got to the point last year where I literally heard voices in my head, they tried to convince me to go back on everything I’ve ever believed amongst some other disturbing areas I’d rather not mention… but lemme tell you: that scared me. Since then, I’ve started at the Belfast Met’ College. I’ve met loads of new, uber cool people there from similar but different backgrounds as me. I’m also much happier than I was last year.
My point is: Life gets Better. Trust me when I say there’s light ahead of you Samantha. That kid inside you will probably be the single greatest thing to ever happen to you. Don’t dismiss any future relationships with guys, I’d like to ask that. I’d like to think we have some redeeming qualities like. I’m glad you appreciate my review btw. Its quite nice to feel appreciated.
HAD MY BABY BOY 12/29/2013 at 10:57 he weighs 8 pounds 4oz 19 in long
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