Poetic Doses

Take me in doses
read me in measurements
or I'll overwhelm
  
You'll be
wandering around
wet and hard
lost at the cost
of your curiosity



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. Curiously killed the cat. We must be careful when we dance in the heat and measurement. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Amanda]

This is my favorite poem that I've read of your's. I'm not big on a lot of foul words in poetry, so I think this was beautifully written

[Eddie Phillips]

I like the idea of this poem. it was intoxicating and alluring.

[Jack...]

Two different feelings here, both of them good.

[Barbara Walker]

Forewarned and all that! Enjoyed reading.

[Michael Heasley Jr]

Overwhelming intensity for sure. I like the forewarning.

[TL Boehm]

read me in measurements. Love that.

[Echoes of Eros]

A sweet measure of all that is you, with a wild, magical metaphor. Perfection.

[Sami Khalil]

Laughing too...Good one...:)