Deep Penetration

You walk up
beside me
soft c**k
in hand
and say
lick it
make it
hard

A devious
smile takes over
my lips

And

I feel it grow
rock hard
as I slowly
slide it in and out
sucking and blowing
with little moans and sighs
escaping my hungry mouth

You pull it out
:( walk away :(
and leave me dripping
for your deep penetration



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Stevo The POE-t]

I would ask who this was written about? But I think I may have an idea, anyway good piece as usual... I love the way you write, I love the structure... Your passion it burns like a wildfire... No matter how you explain it, your words transform to a living breath... You can certainly make the person feel what it is your feeling when you write...

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol I bet you do. Best review I have ever gotten in my life because it's from you and you so rarely share or talk about how you feel so this means more to me than you will ever know I had to fight the tears away I love you so much sometimes I can't stand it it feels like I may burst like my heart would explode if I did not have poetry to convey how I feel about you the good and the bad lol

[wordman]

damn I had to take a cold shower lol
ron

[Kirbyfactor]

Interesting topic for a poem

[MsJewel]

A tease of a poem. Erotic, sensual and tastefully written.

:) Julie

[Eddie Phillips]

You never mask your words. That is not a bad thing. many writers could not pull off a poem like this without going over the edge. You keep it erotic and play at the message you tell. I love how you dance through sexual images and tense words of passion. Great poem.

[writing mojo]

nothing to evasive or hidden in the direction of amble skin being teased, like the images and the sensual cadence, it is your word embodiment of seeing sex and lust as a portrait...you paint in panting ease....your muse is ever so your influence. great piece as usual.

[Ruth]

Well...yup...as usual, damn good ;) xx

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

ha ha Thanks Poppy

[isus]

i say are you wanna be my girl :D

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

haha I don't think my husband would be happy about that

[isus]

aaw over here we would say 'two bad, Milosh dead' :D

[isus]

or 'two bad guys killed Milosh' :D