Deep Penetration

You walk up
beside me
soft c**k
in hand
and say
lick it
make it
hard

A devious
smile takes over
my lips

And

I feel it grow
rock hard
as I slowly
slide it in and out
sucking and blowing
with little moans and sighs
escaping my hungry mouth

You pull it out
:( walk away :(
and leave me dripping
for your deep penetration



By Samantha Pruitt

Reviews

[Stevo The POE-t]

I would ask who this was written about? But I think I may have an idea, anyway good piece as usual... I love the way you write, I love the structure... Your passion it burns like a wildfire... No matter how you explain it, your words transform to a living breath... You can certainly make the person feel what it is your feeling when you write...

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol I bet you do. Best review I have ever gotten in my life because it's from you and you so rarely share or talk about how you feel so this means more to me than you will ever know I had to fight the tears away I love you so much sometimes I can't stand it it feels like I may burst like my heart would explode if I did not have poetry to convey how I feel about you the good and the bad lol

[Barbara Walker]

How rude to leave you hanging like that! Your writing is ero

[Abhishekizy]

In fact i once published a write here under erotism category and one of the reviewer said " If you want to f**k, then f**k...why write" . And i was disappointed. But then if things exists, so does the write about them. Its bold and its completely functional. Period.

[Abhishekizy]

Hiya,
This piece begins with a very random generic act ( not underestimating the feel in it), but what strikes most is the way you end it. Its sharp, cliff hanger kinda closure . " leave me dripping for your deep penetration". Your "right on the face" attitude ( in this write) appeals me. Yes, its erotic and very graphic as well. I am glad you haven't used any imagery here ( scope minimal as well). Looking through a naughty side of me...yes its a well done effort

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Samantha - Again like the second one---this goes all out with the eroticism...Good to read your work…Thanks for the invite to read your thoughts to paper at Writers Café...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…I have very little time on my hands…making the most of everyday and taking today to read as many as I can…keep writing and sharing your creative talent here and elsewhere…

[gombeggar]

hmm...a very wanton work 2 be sure...very explicit and still well written...don't be letting kids read this though

[FlatLineBeauty]

Amazing piece my dear. I could feel my lips sliding back and forth on a c**k while i read this... or was that my Popsicle? Either way I loved it :) xo Winter

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

haha thanks

[Mike Emil]

you have my attention
kohlrabi theater can use your talent
are you willing?
are you a presenter of your works?
HAI!!!
words are love

[minisla]

It was a pleasure reading this. Really vivid portrayal of the subject.

[Rob Santana]

I said GOD DAMN!!!!! Strong visuals you writing put in my mind, haha. Well done.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

You write the erotic like no other...your strength and raw, gritty nature serve you well when it comes to pouring your emotions out on the page. I admire your bravery and your tenacity.