Ink-gasm

Slowly
feeling
building
gushing
pressure
as my pen
explodes

in an ink-gasm
cause my poetry
cums all over the page

By Samantha Campbell Pruitt

Reviews

[Amberlight]

. . . girl, you are beautiful. I love the formatting and concept of your poem. Just a pure simple turn on!

[smilempsn]

nice use of words..!! :)

[Astro]

I had to giggle as I read this one Samantha, but it was great from build-up to final line.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing description gave life to the photo. You are a artist. You make your words come alive. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Barbara Walker]

The imagery that cums to mind is mind blowing! LOL

[Roberta Emmanuelle Leig..]

This conjures up a very clear mental image of a girl lying naked on her back, with a puddle of wet ink slowly drying on her body ... very nice. :)

[Echoes of Eros]

You've got the hottest ink, and most sensual of minds. May you have five, six... or is it seven ink-gasms a day please. Burns the pages.

[Stevo The POE-t]

I really love the way you wrote this... Your so expressive when you write... Great job baby

[Chris]

yes please... welcome back

[Will]

Good metaphor, i Ike how you executed it. Good flow and unique use of font size to emphasize a climax. Well done.