Lost Words

I use to love to
watch you write
waiting with anticipation
for you to lay your pen down

Now when I see
you reach for it
I'm filled with dread
for the pain that will
fill my heart
as I read
the words
you write
for her


By Samantha Campbell Pruitt

Reviews

[Death Girl]

nicely written. I am a fan of your work. You are a very gifted writer.

[BL]

So very sad and also very well delivered in short verse

[Saumya]

beautiful:)
sometimes, the very short words say a lot..and speak more clearly than spoken words..:)
this one was one of those good examples..
well done
best wishes
saumya

[lei]

sad but beautifully penned.

[B-poet]

Nice work. A lost love that has moved on. The ones that got away are the hardest to forget.

[smilempsn]

Nice on Samantha :)

[Barbara Walker]

So much story and emotion in such a short piece! Difficult to pull off but you did a magnificent job!

[Avinash]

that love no longer belonging to you..a wish to turn back the clock.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

This was about a dream i had