Wild Sea

Words rolling
in a wild sea
of seductive sentences
flowing and crashing
into metaphors

Licked by silver
tongued maidens

Twitching on words
orgasming with
every word
spoke

By Samantha Campbell Pruitt

Author's Note

Yes I know "orgasming" is not a word but oh well lol

This was inspired by a fellow writer Astro, he left me a comment on Brain-Gasm so I stole a line from it ... Please read and review his work

His line was "Rolling in a sea of seductive sentences"

Reviews

[Astro]

This is a fun way to describe the power of words and the wordsmith herself. I wouldn't worry about 'orgasming' being an issue, as I find a lot of words are picked up by spellcheck that shouldn't be and if anyone is qualified to create new words, well let it be writers. You wouldn't be the first, nor the last to use that term. It is a well formed expression of how each word erupts into a meaning within the reader, not always the same for everyone, it is personal like an orgasm, and tied to perception. Nice adaptation of my own words Samantha.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Much thanks Astro ... who knows I may may write a few more for the night is over Im feeling that pull to write to create to pour myself out into verse

[Astro]

Become one with the flow you'll go further than you would fighting it's currents.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

keeping with the sea pulling me down into her creative juices lol

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

well Im offline to write

[Astro]

See ya later thought creator.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

"Thought Creator" ... So many ideas fill my head reading those two words Im using that as a title and writing a poem based on that thought Thanks

[Astro]

You're welcome, again. ;)

[Larry Dyson]

hmmm--mermaids? silver tongued m

[Avinash]

It sounds like dream for someone hunting for literary gems.

[KeeD]

The days of being lost in a wild sea of seductive sentences.. I would gladly be cast away over and over again. Really liked this small piece, it had that Samantha passion in it.