Wild Sea

Words rolling
in a wild sea
of seductive sentences
flowing and crashing
into metaphors

Licked by silver
tongued maidens

Twitching on words
orgasming with
every word
spoke

By Samantha Campbell Pruitt

Author's Note

Yes I know "orgasming" is not a word but oh well lol

This was inspired by a fellow writer Astro, he left me a comment on Brain-Gasm so I stole a line from it ... Please read and review his work

His line was "Rolling in a sea of seductive sentences"

Reviews

[Astro]

This is a fun way to describe the power of words and the wordsmith herself. I wouldn't worry about 'orgasming' being an issue, as I find a lot of words are picked up by spellcheck that shouldn't be and if anyone is qualified to create new words, well let it be writers. You wouldn't be the first, nor the last to use that term. It is a well formed expression of how each word erupts into a meaning within the reader, not always the same for everyone, it is personal like an orgasm, and tied to perception. Nice adaptation of my own words Samantha.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Much thanks Astro ... who knows I may may write a few more for the night is over Im feeling that pull to write to create to pour myself out into verse

[Astro]

Become one with the flow you'll go further than you would fighting it's currents.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

keeping with the sea pulling me down into her creative juices lol

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

well Im offline to write

[Astro]

See ya later thought creator.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

"Thought Creator" ... So many ideas fill my head reading those two words Im using that as a title and writing a poem based on that thought Thanks

[Astro]

You're welcome, again. ;)

[Jon Roggie]

Fun write! Nice way to run with an inspiration, and give credit to the origin!

[lei]

your wild words are swimming in my thoughts, this is beautiful

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Words can be anything we make them dear, that's the beauty of being a poet, well done, good read.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. I had to read again. Good to fall in the wildness of real passion and desire. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[wishystar]

I don't know why, but this poem feels so powerful and I absolutely love the first stanza! Great job :)

[Barbara Walker]

changing it to "an orgasm with every word" will fix that. Plus the correct tense is "spoken."
Twitching on words-
an orgasm with
every word
spoken.

really great piece of work!

[Eddie Phillips]

Hey your word choice is effective because it fits the environment you create in your writing. I enjoyed this piece.

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

This is awesome, a very different piece indeed :) But I would recommend changing "orgasming" to "orgasmic". I dunno, just would flow easier to me. Other than that, I love what you have here :)

[BL]

Middle stanza rules, making words physical and real is your forte, really enjoyable