Soul Tasting

Every time I kiss you
my lips tightly pressed
on your mouth

My hand in your hair

I yearn for your tongue
to slide and slither
deep within

Tasting all my secrets
devouring my darker desires

Cause I want to suck
the poetry like cum
dripping off of your tongue
and lick the meaning from your lips

I want to taste love

By Samantha Campbell Pruitt

Reviews

[BL]

Your passions overlap so beautifully well and morph together in a rich heady mix creating a strong cocktail for the body and mind of the reader.

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

Damn, this is some sexy s**t right here, lol. I love it :p

[Rachel Anderson]

I love this! Keep them coming, girl.

[Eddie Phillips]

Wow! it was sultry and highly sexual. It lets the reader know what you want. I thought it was well done.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

Just let you cup over flow ... Lovely

[Jack...]

Very steamy and erotic, but beautiful in its own special way.

[Luke L]

Whoa! Hot stuff you dirty little lady :)

[Barbara Walker]

I think this is an excellent poem, great imagery, intense raw feeling to it. I almost think it might be even better without the last line. Without it, it makes the reader wonder the meaning from the lips IS and what it tastes like. With the last line, as is, you're giving the answer (love) away.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Touching and creative to the point of descriptive pleasure, well done.