Lava Souls

Hungry lips
pressing down
on tender bruised flesh
igniting passions to rise
and swelter over
flowing magmas
internal eruptions
as souls become
volcanoes

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

This popped into my head last night not sure about the title but its kinda growing on me lol

Reviews

[Tina]

Hot ;) I want those lips on my volcano!

[Vouren]

I like this, very interesting

[Libby Carsons]

i love how the poem ends and the simplicity of the poem. great job!

[Richard Layne]

I like the title. It works well with the ending and the er um lava that erupts between them.

[Eddie Phillips]

It works. It is very imaginative and sends a very clear message as to its meaning.

[Gypsy Dreamweaver]

I love the title. To compare the heat of a moment with eruptions of volcanos is a nice twist. Very nice piece.

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I love the metaphor of souls/people as volcanoes, and how they erupt when they ignite to one another. Great job, Sam.

[Shawn Purcell]

really enticing. So much said but so much left to the imagination. I can feel the tension mount

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Id like to say thanks for all the reviews ... MUCH THANKS

[Vria P Crow]

your welcome:D

[Famous B. A]

The elegance of this piece cannot be overemphasized. The poem is well embellished by the title and other comely words like magmas, volcanoes and so on. I wish to place this poem on an oven and have it baked, samantha. Lol!