Uneven Kisses

1 kiss

2 kisses
3 kisses

I want
more

My lips left

Uneven

I need
number 4

I'm hanging
on desires lips

Cause

He left
with my kiss
hungrily
resting
upon his
lips

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

Im weird we all know that but I like things to be even Im a little ocd lol like when steve kisses me it has to be in sets of 2's lol and a lil while ago when he left ... he left me hanging so I had to put it to verse lol

Reviews

[KeeD]

this is what it feels like to feel love.. :D
Gosh my palm and me need to make out some more, brb :P

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

haha omg lol

[Meliss@k]

Girl, i'm right there with ya!
Except, mine is OCD about never wanting the kisses to stop... haha

Loved this poem

[Will]

I think we're all a little OCD with certain things. I really like this poem. It has nice, solid flow, and a clear, strong message behind it. Great work, Sam.

[Barbara Walker]

Cute poem and it has a good flow and rhythm.

[Silas]

Oh this reminds me of my girlfriend. Very funny, very nice. XD

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Haha This is too funny. I've never heard of someone being OCD with kisses, but I get it. You are quite the writer, my friend; an intriguing mind indeed! Well penned.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol I have to wait till Friday to get that kiss ... He loves torturing me and I love that he loves that lol

[Ravyne Hawke]

Clever! Fun! and very well done!

[Astro]

Haha, cute. O C D Over Craved Desires.

[sparkle]

nice 1