Uneven Kisses

1 kiss

2 kisses
3 kisses

I want
more

My lips left

Uneven

I need
number 4

I'm hanging
on desires lips

Cause

He left
with my kiss
hungrily
resting
upon his
lips

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

Im weird we all know that but I like things to be even Im a little ocd lol like when steve kisses me it has to be in sets of 2's lol and a lil while ago when he left ... he left me hanging so I had to put it to verse lol

Reviews

[BL]

3 is the magic number

[Kristin Lee]

This has an addictive feelings to it so its interesting to me that you say in your author note that you felt almost ocd when you were writing on the topic. Its in the need, the lingering sensation that I feel it. Like it has to be even. It's fun, fiesty, yet loving and tender. And the picture adds to the feeling of addiction or intoxication. I don't know why I like this one so much, but I do. Well done :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

thank you very much

[B-poet]

Written infatuation at its best. A kiss is special as long as it's meant for the right person. Good work. :)

[JulieÉmile]

Very sweet. Really leaves you begging for more. Thank you for sharing this!

[Damien Thibodeaux]

Nice rhythm to this one, Sammy. I understand being a little OCD over things like this. In fact I'm a little OCD about everything (lol).

[Sharon]

I like the structure. Very unique. Nicely written.

[smilempsn]

Its good that you have the inspiration around you.. ^-^

[Ency Bearis]

this means that he has no halitosis

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol thank god neither of us do

[Chris]

Of course you did...

You stated the case very well.

[trainwreck]

This was very well-done. I like how you interpreted a real life situation. thank you for sharing!