Uneven Kisses

1 kiss

2 kisses
3 kisses

I want
more

My lips left

Uneven

I need
number 4

I'm hanging
on desires lips

Cause

He left
with my kiss
hungrily
resting
upon his
lips

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

Im weird we all know that but I like things to be even Im a little ocd lol like when steve kisses me it has to be in sets of 2's lol and a lil while ago when he left ... he left me hanging so I had to put it to verse lol

Reviews

[Saint No-One]

This is a very enjoyable read, it has an almost sing song-ey tone to it which is adorable, although the passion still comes across red hot. I love the juxtaposition here between that playfulness and sensuality.

[aisling virginia]

I really like this. The picture at the bottom completes the poem perfectly. Great write!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

very romantic and sweet. :) well written

[Breathetheair]

I think this was so cute because I can see there is a tenderness there. Great work, love the way it flowed really easily..

[Aristede Craig Jr]

lol awesome im a odd ball so my girlfriend has to give me 3 lol
nice write

[Steve]

Very sweet and original

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and perfect

[Magdelena]

ADORABLE!!!! This made me smile.. Grin ear to ear.. I loved how you brought it forth too!!! Psst, I'm weird also.. So love doing things up a notch at time.. Okay all the time.. :)

Great job!

Mags

[Imara]

Haha I love that last verse that was just very cute and powerful at the same time. The yearning is clearly expressed in here. The bolding of the numbers and use of the numbers as opposed to the use of the word form is unpopular and it works with the visual form of the piece very nicely. I love your straightforward style! Great job once again :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

thanks Imara

[Eddie Phillips]

So creative. I enjoyed the full story you told in this poem. You possess a graceful use of words. I enjoyed the message and the story in this piece.