Edging

My fingertips
trail sensually over
warm wet flesh

When I slide
my fingers
against the raging
inferno between
my thighs

I edge ......

Every nerve
ablaze with
desperate
clawing
need

And still
Ill edge

Till you're
once again
inside me

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

for Steve

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Beautifully done...sexual, overt, but not passed the point of being uncomfortable. Rather, this is quite beautiful. The longing is what I love the most here...the painful waiting until the person you want to be with is once again with you; and two become one.

[Tarry Franck]

Beautiful and erotic - lovely write I thought

[RyanXIII]

beautiful, sexual, elegant.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are amazing. Make your poetry come alive with feeling and desire. Honest words leading the reader to thoughts to ponder. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sparkle]

wow , well done , I think you were accurate in choosing your terms , like it

[John Alexander McFadyen]

As always every word expressively sensual! One typo:
Till you're once again
inside me

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I always miss that lol thanks

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love the longing and the desire in this piece. Going to the edge can sometimes be maddening.. going over, ecstasy. Lovely write, Samantha. Love your erotic poetry.

[Astro]

Edge indeed. Run not into that inferno, no...please delay your coming. Some delights are well worth the wait, or so the tour-guide at Yellowstone would advise. Your writing opens up a box and reveals the big surprise. Naughty you.

[Ency Bearis]

Interesting write, poetically written that exercise of the sexuality, a good healthy measure to relieve stress. Great one.

[KeeD]

The controlled wait and build up gives such uncontrollable pleasure..
sexual write..in the limits of art and brilliance :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Much Thanks