Vibrational Hunger

A beautiful
submission

I am suffering
that internal echo

The sin-sensations
lingered just under the surface
of my wanton mind

I wish I could
cover my raw thoughts
and naked need

Enshrouding
every thought
of my hearts
deepest yearning
 
A burning vibrational hunger
that stokes the fire
of my souls desire

Every part of my being
is cracking apart

Words are like
earthquakes

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Quite brilliant with words. Well done.

[B-poet]

Each and every poem you write gets better and better everytime. You're growing from a gifted poet to a great one. Keep up the great work. :)

[Imara]

"The sin-sensations" Haha I thought this was very clever of you. Nice play on words that also drives the idea that what you're doing is bad but feels good.
A very sexual theme again. Which to me begs the question why should women be ashamed of masturbation. Men brag and joke about it but women for some reason can't? I love your word choice that shows the desire for it but the inner turmoil of not wanting to because we think it's dirty and "sinful"
Your last stanza puzzled me a bit, actually not the stanza but the one word. "Words" At first I took it to mean something so small could be so big, (In reference to talking dirty) then I thought no, it's the fear of what someone else would say about her that would cause this earthquake. Now I've come to the realization that maybe it's both.
Either way great job on a topic that is little talked about :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Ive written about masturbation many times in my poetry I do it like 6 times a day you should read my short poem Delicious Delirious Death http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/VirginPoet/1146434/

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I find no shame in it

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

But my bf does not like me doing it so yeah :( lol

[Imara]

lol if he doesn't like you doing it then he should probably "do" something about it if yknow what I mean ;) Haha

[Imara]

Lol this is very contrary to your name hahaha

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

well I guess the secrets out ... I lost it a month ago lol Im no longer a 33 year old virgin but I'm keeping the name

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

God I cant believe I said that lol covers face and turns red

[Imara]

Awws that's cute. Well at least you lost it to someone special :) Haha Congrats (?)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol thanks

[Barbara Walker]

In the third stanza, it should be 'lingering" to go with the present tense of the stanza before that. I love your diction in this piece. It flows well and all the stanzas are great but those last two lines are outstanding!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

"Words are like/earthquakes"--these two lines made the entire piece for me. You have a true talent when it comes to just simply stating a thought with purpouse and profound intent. Well written, my friend!

[ReaThoughts]

Beautiful. I like the imagery. Very raw. Well done.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yup. Richter scale indeed!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol thanks

[tcd123]

The imagery is amazing one phrase that really stuck with me was "wanton mind" I like that a lot! Great piece

[Ravyne Hawke]

Well written with wonderful imagery. My fave lines:

I wish I could
cover my raw thoughts
and naked need

Words are like
earthquakes

Both of those gave me such wonderful images in my mind. Short, sensual and well-versed. Thanks!