Vibrational Hunger

A beautiful
submission

I am suffering
that internal echo

The sin-sensations
lingered just under the surface
of my wanton mind

I wish I could
cover my raw thoughts
and naked need

Enshrouding
every thought
of my hearts
deepest yearning
 
A burning vibrational hunger
that stokes the fire
of my souls desire

Every part of my being
is cracking apart

Words are like
earthquakes

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Jibey]

A gutsy description of the irresistible call of desire...

[Richard Layne]

As usual, you take a basic feeling and turn it into something more. Well done

[smilempsn]

I liked this piece....
Specially......

'I wish I could
cover my raw thoughts
and naked need
'

and

'Every part of my being
is cracking apart

Words are like
earthquakes'

[brucethemaster]

Very good.

[Eddie Phillips]

I liked it. It was original as always and it played with the vibration theme until the end. The best line was the last line "Words are like Earthquakes"

[John]

Stunning. I especially like the "Words are like earthquakes"

[Silas]

Very nice.

[Damien Thibodeaux]

Erotically subtle and deep. Good write Sammy.

[Vria P Crow]

I am in the mood for quote dissections today :D

"A beautiful
submission"

There is a constant conflict between the submissive and the dominator whether it be during sex or daily routines.

Vocabulary that I Enjoyed

1. internal echo

The Internal echo can refer to the repetition of inner conflict.

2. sin-sensations

Very clever! I can hear the word "sin" in the word "sensations." I understand that these sexual feelings are considered "sinful" or "immoral." However, there is much more to sex then we give credit for.

3. "cover my raw thoughts"

This is another favorite of mine because you are revealing your fantasies that become:

(1) Unbound
You are able to show what goes on beneath the surface.

4. "Vibrational Hunger":

I picked this line since it is apart of your title. I honestly feel that it depicts the whole poem correctly. Forgive me ahead of time...But here is my blunt interpretation:

The narrator is so horny that she has no idea how to release it because of logic. :P

CONCLUSION

The final stanza was incredible! It left me wondering what exactly you meant by that.

Words= speech
Earthquakes= sex

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

very good deduction :)

[Vria P Crow]

Thank ya!

[Vria P Crow]

Sometimes, I take poetry literal. I felt this one was one of those times.

[minnie:)]

This is a poem that is very delicate with words, perfect flow to the poem as well.
~Minnie