Pale Moonlight

Kissing you in the dark
in the pale moonlight
Lighting up your eyes
igniting soul to shine
we burn like the stars above us

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Jibey]

Intensely romantic...delightful

[Alexander Rodgers]

Short but awesome and powerful, you did well.

[Rachel Anderson]

I love it! Strong imagery, which is hard to accomplish at all, let alone in the small space you used. Such an excellent job.

[Barbara Walker]

Oh, i like this! It's short but you say so much in those few words! In this case, less is more! Great write!

[Damien Thibodeaux]

A great verse which paints the scene well, Sammy. I would add an 's' to make soul(s) plural.

[minnie:)]

Even though there are such little words in this poem it's still beautiful. Your poems always turn out great :)
~Minnie

[B-poet]

A new found passion described here in a astounding fashion. Nice write. :)

[smilempsn]

Pale MoonLight... I liked the Poem Name as well ^-^

[Silas]

Oh gosh this reminds me about how I felt about my girlfriend when we first met and still feel a year later. Ah... Sweet romance in the night.

[Sam]

awww soooooooooo romantic!!!!!