Apocalyptic Hearts

I am raw
stripped
down

To my
very
core

My soul
is weeping
swaying
away
heart
ache

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

I like this, but it is so "raw" that I wanted to see a stronger word than swaying" there. Just my 2 cents!

[Will]

How the hell do you pull of such brilliant pieces in such few words? Excellent and thought provoking, and definitely got me thinking. Good work, Sam.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Simple, stark, but still evoking emotion. Well done.

[Jack...]

Very nice.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Short, simple and perfect, well done, good read.

[Death Girl]

I love this! I don't know what else to say but great job on this i really like it.

[icelandicblue]

Your poem is a window to palpable pain.

[chaotic katie]

Such stong emotion in this piece, very captivating

[M Sanders]

I like this simple use of words with such a strong feeling. :)

M

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You do have a way with few words to convey such emotion