Apocalyptic Hearts

I am raw
stripped
down

To my
very
core

My soul
is weeping
swaying
away
heart
ache

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Jibey]

An economy of words to match the naked exposure of all that is left

[Gypsy Dreamweaver]

This piece is very interesting. It gives my poet's imagination plenty of room to wander. Thank you!

[Eddie Phillips]

Another simple but though provoking poem. You are a master of short pieces like this. I always enjoy them.

[Alexander Rodgers]

Love the brutal simplicity oh this piece

[Ben Walker]

leaves me feeling very vulnerable - I like the simplicity of your writing, it gives just the right amount of nothingness to leave the reader in complete wonder

[B-poet]

I like your writting style here. It's profound, daring, and convincingly distinguished in a class of its own. Great job here. :)

[Kenneth Stephen Goodpas..]

Again, short and packed full of emotion. I was hoping for a little more of a read, but it's still very good.

[Coyote Poetry]

A complete poem in so few words. I like the use of the short statements giving life to the emotion of the thoughts in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[BL]

Very to the point and meaningful

[Imara]

I think you have master the art of using little words to convey maximum meaning. Amazing job expressing the loss of something, anything, though most will take it to do something with love. It could be anything, and the loss of whatever it was has ripped us apart. The loss has hurt you, so deeply that you're raw and vulnerable. Great job. I love it.