Seconds Minutes Hours

Its like holding my breath
as my lungs collapse
Ill love you
till my
death
rattle

And my heart
ceases to beat
and slowly fades
into the abyss
of he left me

Days pass
like eternity
in an hour

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

inspired by Steve

Reviews

[Ben Walker]

I feel like that took me about 5 hours to read and i mean that in a good way. I like it

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

it took me maybe 10 min to write but it felt like forever odd thing is that I had the last verse first it came to me as I was hugging him good bye and I said it out loud and he was like go write it down before you lose and I was like no lol ... Ill get to see him next week ... times gonna pass so slow

[Ben Walker]

I know the feeling, I used to be in a relationship and we both lived at opposite ends of the UK - we would only see each other once or twice a month for a weekend. The time we were apart used to feel like years, but when time apart feels that bad time together is even more valued

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

so true ... But I hope you are happy now with who ever you are with :)

[Alex Avery]

seems just like a poem of mine

[Jack...]

Very cool. I know this feeling my friend. Some things take our breath away and some make it impossible to breathe.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent read and write.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Much Thanks