Steve

My sister told me
 that I have many different laughs
I never understood why

Until now
at this very
moment

It just occurred to me
that I had not found my laugh

Than you come along
with your goofy nature
and release
me

You have
brought out
my true laugh

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Writer *78*]

The one person that keeps us grounded on this earth but also makes us feel as if we are on cloud 9 can do alot of other things just by a look more than a laugh. Short and Sweet. Well done

[The Girl with the smile]

This is a cute poem! It makes me smile. Nice write!! :)

[Rachael]

So adorable! This poem made me feel all lovey-dovey inside. Great poem! :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I like the idea for this one, and the beginning is quite strong. I find the first three lines truly enchanting. I think a little more in the last stanzas would punch this one up...the "you" isn't quite descriptive enough--I'd like to know more about why "he" or "she" brought out your "true laugh". Error in the first word/first line of the 4th stanza--"than" should be "then"...?

[M.Kilani]

Nice poem, very realistic and takes the reader away from drama, made me smile, well done.

[KeeD]

:D So honest, so cute, thank you for sharing.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Thanks Keegan I left you a lil message on skype ... Im actually sitting with Steve right now and Ill be posting 2 new poems one of which he inspired while I watched him writing his newest poem Vision Of Death

[KeeD]

That's so cool, be sure to read request them to me so I can have a look at them when you post them :) You guys are adorable and inspire each other, kudos^^.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I will and thanks

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A message that all families should read and heed to, well done, good read.

[Country Girl]

I love this piece of work, it is really good.!! (:

[Lonely Islander]

I loved this piece as it occupied beautiful emotions and was written in a simple way that made it more amazing. Its great to have a good laugh, the person who can give you that is greater:-D.

[Will]

Isn't nice when someone can make us genuinely laugh like that? Great piece, with clear emotion behind it.