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By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Wow...this is out there...but I like it. You are never afraid to take chances, are you? I wish I had your poetic courage; all of my sexual innuedos are hidden in cryptic imagery...haha

[Vria P Crow]

Wow! What attracted to me first was the peach image. Honestly, I had the image of the "perfect vagina." haha I cannot believe I am writing that. I apologize if that is offensive. However, this was not too far off from the content of the poem.

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I love how you have attached the peach to virginity. it gives it a sense of innocence. In addition, I thought that the format was excellent! The image of "dripping ink" is very clever, and different from your usual stuff. In this poem, I feel that represents the loss of virginity.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

nope you did not offend .. it takes a lot to offend me and thanks for your review

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome:D I really enjoyed this one. The imagery was stunning! You never cease to amaze:D

[B-poet]

Nice format and written structure for the allure of a beautifully seen ripe peach.
Nice imagery as well. Great job. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Unique and intriguing!

[KeeD]

As my eyes flow down to read my mind can be lost in the thought forever.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

that's a rather poetic review ... thanks

[Verser]

I agree. This is indeed delicious. You can't even read it without a sliding tongue--and the mouth waters. Nice, very nice.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

delicious

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

One to ponder!

[BL]

Simply delicious. Is this a poem or a cry for love?

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

There is always a deeper meaning in my work that few see. Thank you

[BL]

I have seen two meanings is there a third?

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

do tell what you have seen and than Ill tell you perhaps you have one Ive not thought of

[BL]

1 You are horny
2 You express that through your writing

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

:) and it is a metaphor for longing hence the format well second reason for the format lol and thank you

[BL]

I like the vertical / long format, its very good draws the eyes in, keep writing and RRing me

[Coyote Poetry]

Photo gave life to the statement. Good use of visual to make your point.
Coyote