Control

I need to loose control on you
let my inner animal free
to feed to devour
taring through your flesh
just to see your heart beat
slow and go still
as you cum in me

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[BL]

You have captured a wild moment and tamed it onto the page, very erotic too

[Joylene Miller-Rios]

WOW

[The 13th Eros]

This is a fierce fire that devours its victim... and how the victim must die into the sweetest bliss. xx

[Will]

Sensual and loving. Nicely done

[KeeD]

I can't control my emotions when I read a piece by you. Happy, excited, inspired.
As the plot slowly reaches it's climax, I'm sure my heart would skip a beat as I share my quick release, completed our spectacular feat, your captivating words have tamed this beast.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

wow Keegan you made me giggle and thank you for your witty comment

[B-poet]

That's as passionate as you can get when you become one with someone else. Very intriguing. Very distinctive, unique and erotically creative. :)

[The Nude Writer]

Hmmmm.. On of your best :)
Very wild and unchained :)