For those of you who do not know what edging is ... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Orgasm_control
In part this idea help to inspire it "To me I view writing as a sexual act" but as for the rest of my inspiration Im not saying lol all I have to say is try edging it will blow your mind
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Your poetry is really something. You are quite unique! ;-) I like the flow of the poem and the words you chose. I really like how you manage to make it "literature sex" or "sexual literature", you know, it's never one or the other. And it's not smut~ this liking of writing to a sexual activity is done in a creative and entertaining way. Very good. (Two things: Did you mean "release" at the end? It's missing the "e". And, I see some readers might be uncomfortable, there's a setting for mature content when you input your writing).
I enjoyed this poem, as always, and feel free to send me more read requests :-)
This is a very creative and unique way of describing a poet's manner of writing. Although I'm quite sensitive to sexual topics as I do not reach that age yet, this will be the first one that I've read so far. Very beautiful piece made by you!
Wow i'm at a loss for words and for me that's pretty rare.. sitting here at the edge of my seat.. wanting to experience this controlled feeling of losing control.
I cum to my own poetry
my very own stash
of verbal porn.
I feel the same way, not about my poetry though, but about yours. You're a very talented writer. Reaching limits of ecstasy taking your readers on a vivid journey of intelligence and sex. Can't wait to see what you publish next :)
The line that took me right off my chair was "thinking off." It is such a good line, I wonder if you might play with the poem a bit to make it the last line. Isn't that really the thing, at least regarding poetry? Just a thought. But the poem is really good. Sex and poetry have always been intertwined, as it were. Nice job.
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