Unravel Me

I'd tare through you

I'd f**k you forever

I yearn to be
the need
the intoxicating
madness that brings
you to your knees

Exposing the naked flesh  
as I kiss the side of your neck  
breaths become shallow
as each deep and  
desperate kiss
attacks your
bare flesh
like a wild
animal feasting
on it's prey

Loud sighs
of anticipation  
grow louder
Inch-by-Inch
your hot
desire fills  
me to the
very core

So abandon
candied kisses
crush these tender lips
grasp me with a heavy hand
til my flesh near rips

As your thrusts
burn from me
my molten flow
brand me with
your lust

Unraveling
the dirty secrets
within us

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[writing mojo]

where does this sex medicine anecdotal truth preside in? this trip in these word crevices, dark as the next thought of being enlighten through severe touch, branding the thigh line replies you quest us to know through the sway of your unveiled poems...amazing stuff

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I love how your reviews are so poetic in and of themselves galaxies are born as inspiration takes hold In this universe of twilight skin
and mismatched bones your palms are black holes sucking me into their vortex of enlightenment you always make me look at my writing with a different perspective and I thank you for that

[writing mojo]

it's just how I be...

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol well I love it

[John]

Sexuality is the barest of truths.

[Writer *78*]

Very nice work as always brings a smile to my face.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Okey dokey then...

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

I prematurely ejaculated seven words into this; I'm gonna clean off my eyeballs and move onto the next poem. "it's how I be" line of the f*****g day, haha

[@]

good raw writing.

[Steven]

Very nicely written poem, it very successfully expressed the feelings of intensed bliss. I like this one..Sexual yet appropriate..

[Marianne]

What may sound like brutality of need, want and lust inside the abandonment of the flesh is the need and want to be loved inside out . . . with heart, mind and body absorbed in the kind of ecstasy we dream about on lonely nights . . . or in anticipation of a lover who enables us to be devoured no bars held.
I adore the raw honesty of this delicious morsel of candid poetry!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

:) thanks

[Marianne]

:) my pleasure

[Danielle]

I love the last line " Unraveling the dirty secrets within us", because don't we all have that, our dark freaky side. Cool poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and strong words. I like the need and the desire of the words. The directness of the desire gave life to the poem. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[DalainaRenee]

Who hasn't wanted someone in some point in time....the yearning that comes within us when they are near us makes us want them even more! Well expressed here!