Tongue Tied

I am hardcore
pounding passion
so when I cant write
there is a galaxy of ink
coiling in my paper lungs
devouring my spine
from the inside
its a black and red
desire and dead
assisted suicide

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

poetry lets my soul transcend this mortal shallow plane

Reviews

[Jetta Zippora]

Insanely awesome and powerful write. Nice one.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong statements in the poem. Direct lines leading the reader to a very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jibey]

Hardcore pounding passion describes your energy so well...

[Danielle]

Truly wonderful short poem. Your words take ahold and do not let go!

[writing mojo]

such placed words for a universe living eternally in body as spirit...you fly away with this one...and bury us in your exhausted breath...

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Your reviews and your poetry always leave me breathless Thank you! I'm working on a new poem called "Verbal Porn" Would you like to do another collaboration?

[writing mojo]

Actually I wrote a poem in ode to your style..you tell me what you think

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

aww wow cant wait to read it

[Damien Davison]

Very original and interesting poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it! Very intense wording with interesting imagery... A great contribution!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Thank you Damien