I am hardcore pounding passion so when I cant write there is a galaxy of ink coiling in my paper lungs devouring my spine from the inside its a black and red desire and dead assisted suicide
I love this! Short and simple. I really like the lines "so when I can't write there is a galazy of ink coiling in my paper lungs." Awesome approach to writers block. This really explained how I feel when I can't write. It's not that I don't have anything, I just can't get the words out. This poem describes it as if you're MADE of your work. So cool! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
thanks I like to think poets are made of words so when they create they not only spill ink they spil.. read morethanks I like to think poets are made of words so when they create they not only spill ink they spill soul
11 Years Ago
shesh the would make a good minimalist poem think Ima do that lol Thanks for inspiring it
"'paper lungs" This just makes me feel all nice inside. Like, writers and such are the things they create. Books and words and ideas. I truly enjoy this poem, and it is simply amazing.
I was never interested in writing, mainly caused by lack of patience, and I don't have alot of experience with literature. I loved this poem, very detailed, I can agree that when I can't write, it feels like something is there waiting to be written on paper but I can't seem to express it. I have dreams alot about weird things including dragons and fantasy, I also have dreams of love, and interacting with women I have never met before. I guess my writing expresses both. I'd love to write about heists, and thrillers, but I always lean more towards romance and mystery, or some may call it dark. I find your poetry very real, very dark and thought provoking. thank you for writing.
seriously, this is the second thing of yours i have read and i cannot help but wish this was put to music, organ, violin and distorted guitar. very well written, and very, very visceral imagery. a joy to read.
I really like this image: "there is a galaxy of ink/coiling in my paper lungs." It is vivid and it touches the mystery of what writing does, how it feels, what it looks like. Oh what an interesting thing it is to be within the mind of a writer!
You love this bed you made you dream awake you dream asleep reality is in every instant
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
"you dream awake you dream asleep reality is in every instant" uh wow I want to steal that line lol .. read more"you dream awake you dream asleep reality is in every instant" uh wow I want to steal that line lol I may turn it into a poem crediting it to and and also the inspiration that made my ink flow
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