Poetic Release

She remembers
every time
she took
him deep
into her
throat

She would purge
regurgitated words
of a poetic flow

When she’d stroke
with her vocal cords
gagging a thousand
poetic verses

Sliding in and out
of her poetic verbal abode

She’d hear him
speaking in tongues
using a thousand
explicit verbs

Nothing moving
but the muscles
of her oral canal

Holding his phallic
symbol prisoner

Pulsating throat muscles
as she hums a falsetto

His hands go to his head
like it’s about to explode

Juices spilling

Dripping from the
corners of her mouth

Her tongue quickly follows
to recapture every drop

She breathes life
into his poetic
nonexistence

Embracing his lips
with magnetic kisses

He now fully understands

What it is to be
completely received

Knowing the only
expectation she
has of him

Is his
poetic
release

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Danielle]

Once again great piece of writing!

[Writer *78*]

Great work as always.

[Jetta Zippora]

Intoxicating. Gorgeous.

[Jibey]

How well you write of the thrust and cum of inspiration and creativity... and understand the stimulus that arouses the imagination and brings about that ejaculation of words that gives such deep relief...

... and your mouth is so very sweet... :-)

[Moon]

Samatha you are a truely wonderful poet . Each one of your pieces are so welly constructed and so detailed that they are mind blowing . This piece is a good example . Your words form such a sensual and passionate image in this piece .

[Damien Davison]

Indeed you are one of a kind in this genre, no doubt. Such graphic imagery, mixed with intelligent poetic structure and passion. Always an interesting and, don't know if I should use the word considering the subject, haha, but, 'enjoyable' read!

[Revery]

Whoa, aaaa, not sure if I have words for this, wow. Samantha, you do such a tremendous job with this genre. amazing. Raw and real and put in such intricate metaphors. The metaphors are not subtle but they don't need to be.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Strong, flawless write. Nicely done! Loved this.

[Coyote Poetry]

My dear friend. On the edge of adult poetry and thoughts. I like the way you bring in the reader with strong and potent sentences. As always a passionate flow of words and thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote