Lotus Petal Lips

something short

Soft flower
petal blossom

Skin so
supple soft
and sweet

Glistening

Wet pink
lotus petals
unfolded

Hold onto the
curved handles
of my hips

Then slip
 your stamen
between
my pink
lotus
petal
 lips

By Samantha Campbell

Author's Note

may do a rewrite

Reviews

[ur_ginger_girl]

everything you write is good.

[Danielle]

Beautiful wording here!

[Jibey]

No leave it - a beautiful f**k... fragrant, velvety, soft and slippery smooth... I loved the thrust of the words and the beautiful bodies that copulated

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. Polite description create thoughts by strong statements. I like the short sentences and how you led the reader to a good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[writing mojo]

This is flower eroticism, I love it...

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

lol thanks

[Moon]

I love how it is . It has elegence and beauty .

[The Doctor]

Again, you a have a wonderful knack for exotic writing. This is perfect how it is, as Damien said, there is that essence of innocence. Good job.
-The Doctor

[Damien Davison]

I agree with the last reviewer. I loved the idea. Flower metaphor adds a touch of innocence. Nice job.

[Sirius King]

nice as is ;-)