Verbal Voodoo Spit

I'm lust
with loves lips
tongues twisted
in erotic bliss

Enchanting you with my
verbal voodoo spit

I'll make you crave my ink
and thirst for it's stain

Creating textured
shades of desire
from lips unleashed

By Samantha Campbell

Reviews

[Ruth]

I have always loved your writing! You create landscape upon landscape of emotion that is wrapped within shades of the exotic! Awesome! xoxo

[Jibey]

Intensely seductive, the alliteration in the first verse gives it a gritty strength.. and the 'voodoo spit' is erotic in the extreme... enchanting and arousing

(its... not it's = it is :-))

[Tamia123]

I honestly love all your poems!! There' re sensual but sophisticated at the same time and its just delicious!!! Good job! Keep the poems coming!

[ur_ginger_girl]

Interesting

[eglantine]

Hmmm interesting piece. Did you write it inspired by the picture or did you enhance the poem with it? "I'm lust / [I'm lips,] / tongues twist / in erotic bliss" just a suggestion because the way you have it now is a bit confusing. Change "enchanting" to "enchant" or past tense, no keep it present because it's like the speaker of the poem is enticing, hypnotising the reader. Love the third stanza and "lips un-leashed" (uncap 'un' because it's a bit too hard and distracting). Thanks for sharing :)

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

No this was inspired from doing a collaboration with W
Than I looked for the perfect pic for it.

"I'm lust with loves lips" means... Well think of lust as a person but shes more than lust

I might add more to this when it comes to me but I think Ill leave it as is however I did uncap un lol

When I do a rewrite (who knows when) I will take in your suggestions Much Thanks :)

[Bare trees]

Another nice erotic and arousing poem Samantha. Your energy flows through your pen.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

This was inspired from doing a collaboration with W

[Samantha ~virginpoet]