Misc. Love Poems

Ah well, nothing special. They're ok.

Untitled
Although my eyes have mortal bonds
my heart can see your love.
While my eyes only see so deep,
my heart, it beats for yours.
Alas, my eyes can't see it all;
my heart knows no limits.
Aishiteru


Adelaide II

A ship, adrift,
Doomed to sink, alone.
Everyone had abandoned you.
Life had turned its back on you
and nothing was left for you.
I loved you, I taught you hope.
Death was driven from you.
Everything you need, I will fulfill.
 

Reviews

[radian7]

I love Untitled poem.
The poem begin with an incredible line "Although my eyes have mortal bonds
my heart can see your love."
The rhythm of the whole poem does elude me though. Perhaps the writer has a specific way to read it.
Each line is lovely in its own right.