Forlorn

Forlorn

A Poem by Virellius an Fiach
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A short little piece that was inspired by a dead leaf. Go figure.

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Forlorn
Slowly, gently, carried in the wind,
dry, brittle, beautiful,
forsaken by the branch,
refusing to go down;
a single leaf
browned
alone

© 2008 Virellius an Fiach


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That poor little leaf! The images in this piece were great, but my favourite part of it is the form. You start off with a longer line, and then it just slowly recedes until you get to 'alone' on its own line. Very nice!

Posted 16 Years Ago


So sad... yet so beautiful.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Virellius an Fiach
Virellius an Fiach

Redford, MI



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