Gamble

I think it sucks, plain and simple. We can't all be perfect, all the time. :)

Gamble

If a life could be made,
would its dream be
what caused it to fade?

If a life can be weighed,
does its weight match
the price its owner paid?

Now the die will be rolled,
trump card in hand;
with this card, still I fold.

Gambling against my vice,
lost anyways,
for I can't pay the price.

My own life costs too much for me.
Must I suffer more to be made worthy?

Reviews

[Katie Ceas]

Really great emotion. I grade it an A!! :D