Samantha's Pretty Little Sundress

Samantha's Pretty Little Sundress

A Poem by Jed
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a response to the poem "Sundress" by Samantha ~virginpoet

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In your pretty little sun dress
it's you I want to caress
Beautiful smile all the while
With skin so fair
and beautiful flowing hair

In your pretty little sun dress
I want to caress your
Womanly body
so youthful and
so wild so pure
so virgin territory

I am so beguiled

In your pretty little sun dress
I want to caress
All of your charms
Beautiful smile all the while
With skin so fair
and beautiful flowing hair

Womanly body so youthful and wild
Dancing under your pretty little sun dress

I am even more beguiled

This can never be my love I know
But stop me admiring you I will not show
What I now know

Hope you will think of me sometimes
when you wear your pretty little sun dress
and even more so when your in the state of undress

By Jed

© 2011 Jed


Author's Note

Jed
This was inspired by a poem called Sundress by the amazingly talented poet Samantha ~virginpoet so please read and review her

Thanks for the read and please dont forget to review :)

This is just a first rough draft I plan on a rewrite so keep that in mind

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wow thanks Im stunned and speechless

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Added on September 21, 2011
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Jed
Jed

lakeland, FL



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I love music and poetry I write a little but Im more of a painter I play the guitar Im 25 recently single. I cant stand ignorant Shallow people I'm blunt so if I come off as a dick that's why. I'm NO.. more..

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