Great White

Great White

A Poem by Jed

Ok, if this write doesn’t go right,
Ima break left like southpaws because I’m so appalled

By the great debate of ongoing hate trying to predict my untimely fate
The very best predator on this earth is the perfect killing machine
A ferocious extant macropreditory fish
constantly on the hunt that’s carnivorous

Striving for excellence but this s**t is f*****g ridiculous
How faces and images transform right before your eyes like special effects

My pens dominance hierarchy is at top of the food chain
under scrutiny
So of course the crabs in the barrel
are trying to pull me back down to their level

Flabbergasted by your actions
surprised by your counter reflection contradiction

Of your own self hatred not to be more than
So what do I think of success it sucks too much stress
Blocking blessings from fork tongue speak
Immobilizing and paralyzing targets preying on the weak

Most of the peers I grew up with don’t even recognize me
Grown into some they cannot fathom from a little snot nose
Floating on golden pond with ugly ducklings
turned into swans I was just a tadpole

Now rigorous training and countless meditation
verbal exercises and prayer elevated me

Turned into a monstrosity incorporating psychological philosophy
Been ambushed by baby mothers, fathers and brothers
White devils, drug addicts and technical nerds
thinking he can’t surpass them


So now I just try and do me stay focused on family and poetry
Can’t worry about the mundane with enough information technology and politics to drive a Normal man insane can’t complain to anyone in particular so I write to make me feel better

Came a long way from the simple struggle of everyday lost but found
If you want me I’ll be swimming overseas with the Great whites now

© 2011 Jed


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Jed
Jed

lakeland, FL



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I love music and poetry I write a little but Im more of a painter I play the guitar Im 25 recently single. I cant stand ignorant Shallow people I'm blunt so if I come off as a dick that's why. I'm NO.. more..

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A Poem by Jed