Dubstep

free verse poem

Dubstep

Metal and Technology merge into one

creating

cosmic chaos

A tune of no other

Not a flute but a whistle

Not as drum but a bash

Note an xylophone but a blustering wind

The words contour and splash

Then totes how they rale

Just when you think you've finished!

The tone arm springs and the note repeats

Like a broken disc

A wild animal runs in the rhythm

leaping after its prey

The prey reverberates on the screen

ricocheting of the walls

A desperate attempt to flee

from the rhythmic hunter   

The chase beats like a drum

An earth shattering drum,

a never ending trickle,

The water pours in-suppressible

It builds and heightens until the thunder bellows.

Exploding into tiny pinpricks of pandemonium

Reviews

[Aliaksandrauna]

cool way of using personification to make the poem seem more in depth and descriptive. The start of the eighth line seems a bit funky

[TACB]

I also love the use of language, the way you describe dub step makes it sound all the more interesting/cool

[Jane]

LOVE YOUR USE OF LANGUAGE!!!! This is a really unique topic and I love it! (I love Dubstep btw)